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| "Don't Know Why" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 13:49 CST
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I have to agree with Kitsune Hashiba, I'm just happy that the made a Kill me, Kiss me fanfic place now. *gloats* I would clean up the spelling alittle and maybe add some more detail of the whole thing, than you can make it alittle longer and readers will have more to read. Now I wanna write a fic for Kill Me Kiss me. I love that manga! Though I've only read the 1s and 3rd one. I own the 3rd manga though *feels proud* ^.^
| Reviewed By: Kitsune Hashiba [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 00:48 CDT
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Dammit... I was going to try and be the first one with a Kun Kang/Jung Woo fanfic up... *sigh* Anyways, you need to brighten the piece up a little, add some more description, a lemon scene. XD Okay now I'm just being greedy. J/k. In all seriousity, I would consider getting a beta reader, to help you catch your mistakes and typos and make the overall piece flow better. Ah well. Ja ne!
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