| "Reborn: A Second Chance to Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 27, 2005 19:41 CDT
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wonderful fic. Beautiful writing and descriptions. I loved your treatment of Kikyou. She calmed down a lot after the initial fire she had when she was resurected, and you reflected her maturity and her unearthliness very well. I also liked the Inu-Kag playfulness at the end. I was waiting for her to sneeze mid-kiss :)
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Aewi zu Haus On: April 02, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one-shot is really well written!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow! I loved this! it was very well writen. and I loved the fact the you didn't make kikyo a living bitch in this one. I'm not a big fan of hers but alot of thes people make her worse then necessary, and I just don't think its right. so points for you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 16:10 CDT
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You might feel that your fic is just like any other one out there about the love triangle but I think one thing about yours stands out very clearly: the characters' inner thoughts and motivations. You've expressed things so clearly and beautifully...and I really do believe you've done it in character. I love the fact that you've portrayed Inuyasha as intelligent...he's not oblivious to everything around him...just caught in a mix of loyalties and uncertainty. And I like how you let Kagome be human while showing how understanding she's been of Inu's predicament ....even though it's been hurting her. Finally, I'm glad you didn't make Kikyo the evil of evils. I'm not a fan of hers....and I love Inu-Kag all the way, but I think many fics vilify her beyond reason. Although, that's kinda fun too :) I haven't seen the episode you're referring to...so I have no idea what really happens to kikyo in the series. I think adultswim is only up to the episode where the Inu gang meets up with Shiori and her grandfather... Anyways, wonderful writing!
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