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| "Addicted" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, this is a lovely story. I always felt a little sad about Yamcha, because he never really found love after Bulma. But I also had the feeling that he never loved her that much, that they were together just because they were used to. I mean, they did love each other, but in the "we've known each other all our lives" way, just like best friends would. It was obvious, indeed, that Yamcha was never comfortable with the idea of losing his girl to the terrible Saiyan. Besides that, if I remember well, their relationship was never steady and they didn't seem to get along. And it was never passionate, not the way it was with Vegeta. I guess they weren't meant to be together, but they always cared for each other. I think this story shows that well, in a cleaver and sweet way. Nice work!
| Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that was a sad story, but I suppose it's fitting. I hope Yamcha found love afterwards!
| Title: Addicted
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So emotional! Great Yamcha pov, I knew that's why Bulma wasn't playing.. ^-^
| Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy(not logged in) On: August 14, 2005 07:28 CDT
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This is one of my fave fics in this site. There's a trend in most pro-Yamcha fics that show Bulma as an amost villainess. I'm glad that you did not that. It's touching the affect they still feel towards each other, even though Bulma doesn't love him the way Yamcha would like. And the soccer game was creative and different, too.
| Reviewed By: Zara On: April 18, 2005 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!! that was great, really realistic and i love B/V fics there the best, i wasn't really gonna read this songfic, but found i couldn't resist. i liked the whole vegeta being possesive thing that was cool, and you stated the fact that Yamcha had grown over time, but still couldn't quite accept the fact that Bulma would never be his.
| Reviewed By: Yeah! On: April 11, 2005 20:55 CDT
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hey this is really amazing. im a big BV fan and i used to hate Yamcha so much for no frickin reason but u made him seem like a real man in this fic. its just so sad. i feel sorry for him. i mean he was still in love with bulma after so many years. sniff. and i like how vegeta was being possessive and i like all the things bulma sed, about her falling for the arrogant prince and everything. it was very realistic. so yah props to you!
| Reviewed By: LS On: September 18, 2004 22:50 CDT
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This is fun, very believable. The song is perfect for this idea. Of course, I love the part when Vegeta is being possessive and caressing her hip ^_~. I like the part when both Yamcha and Bulma have tears welling in their eyes. Great job! {I like how Yamcha is so honest, showing how he has grown as a person, not wishing Vegeta had stayed dead on Namek anymore, but still admitting his selfish wishes too, very realistic.}
| Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 20:52 CDT
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OH YAMMIE-KUN, it's ok! Come to Mama!!!!!!!!! *huggles Yamcha and cries* I really liked this story--I felt for Yamcha and Bulma was herself and I was proud of Vegeta for being possessive, and the whole little drama worked well. Clean narrative, nice glimpses of the other characters, and it all rang true--yeah, I've been at this party. And poor Yamcha--so easy to please. Such a stunning little honest revelation from Bulma. Bittersweet stuff. *sniff* I've always believed that Yamcha never really got over Bulma, never left the "playing field," never really grew up. Versace shoes--perfect detail!
| Title: I´m addicted
Reviewed By: Bulma/Storm On: September 16, 2004 17:56 CDT
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Wonderful! Poor Yamcha! I think it´s more fair for him now. I loved it, Lynn!
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