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| "The Greatest Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squeals in delight!!!!!!!!!!11
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko - not signed in On: April 03, 2005 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG, this story is hilarious and you have kept everyone true to how Yuu Watase created them. The story is well-written and flows smoothly. I don't think I have to give any suggestions for improvement, because I think it's perfect already. *adds story to her favorites*
| Title: Long overdue...
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 10:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very sweet little story showing the love and friendship Miaka has with her celestial warriors. There is one thing that bothered me: floating quotes. It is not always clear who is speaking what. While Miaka can't see them, she can still hear how they're speaking, whether the words are filled with embarassment or mirth. Miaka could also imagine their actions at times, showing how well she knows them even if all she has to go by is their words. Though it is to your credit that much of what was said was easy to figure out who was speaking as the characters' 'voices' depicted thier individual traits and mannerisms with how they spoke.
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