| "Tracing The Windowpane" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: not logged in-_-;;
Reviewed By: twilight_aura On: June 01, 2005 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg i just reread my last post and i totally screwed up!im guessin kaz is(my) kazuma right?
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Title: not logged in lol
Reviewed By: twilight_aura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
hey!i luuuv this story!^^its hard to find good s-cry-ed stories on media miner!couger is ne of my faves in the series(especially since i luv to run too lol)everything has gone perfect so far in your story!but i have 2 things to ask!:) #1 kasuma(in the anime)is like cougers younger brother or somethin(i own thw whole series but i have bad memory lol)and i was wonderin WHEn (my)kazuma was going to enter in this fan fic!^^i dont care when but i want to know if he is going to be! #2 when couger is older he has alot of trouble with names!lol(not like me)and i was also wondering if that had to do with his alter,but u said that he is a fast learner so i was just wonderting(once again!)if u were going to possible explain this later on(if u havent already...i dont know lol) thank you!and pleaze update!::bow::
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Reviewed By: Aleera On: January 23, 2005 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I foud almost no flaws to any chapter, and the idea is very original. Also, I do love Cougar so.... (sinffel sniffel) please, please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Quycksylver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... this is good stuff - I do adore Cougar; he's just so cool! I really like how you're developing his character, and showing how he grows and changes - very nice. I also like how you've attributed some of his more famous traits to various influences around him. ^_^ I'm a little confused/curious about the Kaz character - I'm assuming that this *isn't* Kazuma, since he's both a blonde and a year or two older than Cougar...although I can certainly see Kazuma being that hyper and talkative as a kid, lol. Oh...I really like Jaid's character too, and how he really *does* care about Cougar, but can't quite get that across - at least not until that lovely scene at the end of ch 3 when he accepts that Cougar's an Alter user even though his family was killed by NAs - so sweet! I really REALLY like this fic, and I hope you continue it - update soon!
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