| "Untitaled ((Because I can't think of one.))" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 21:31 CDT
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Using a title like that is not necessarily the best way to advertie your writing skills. Now, I have not read your story so I do not know weather or not you are a spectacular writer, or so horrible that after reading a paragraph I would feel dumber than before. I do not intend to read your writing. I am mearly writing this review to comment on your title. ////// There are many people who won't even look at your writing becaue you don't have a title. Even if it's just a place holder until you think up of a better title, you should have one. If it's taking you a long time think of one, put off posting the fic until you have one. Think of one in advance as well, so you're not sitting at the screen, trying to figure out what to type in the title box. Even if it's corny, any title is better than "Untitaled ((Because I can't think of one.))" Then, to put the icing on the cake, you spelled untitled wrong. Then you didn't use proper capitalization, as well as using a period in the title. Then you used a contraction, which is only allowed when you are narrating a story in first person, and even then, rarely. Never in a title, unless it is a quote. Then you used the double parenthases; not only is it unnecessary, it is a very, very big "No, no." /////// So, that is what I have to say about your title, or lack of it.
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:14 CDT
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Ok I know I miss spelled title but some one already spelled it that way and I didn't want people to mistake mine for his/her's so I miss spelled it. I like it when the chapters are short pluse this is my first fanfic and I have no clue as to what to put into it to make it longer so just bear with me.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (mm doesn't want to log me in...) On: October 13, 2004 18:00 CDT
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hey there! I still like your story, but it still short... I read it in less than 5 minutes! O.O Anyway, I hope you'll update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rini-chan On: September 30, 2004 18:59 CDT
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I haven't read the story, but I thought it might be good to tell you that you misspelled untitled.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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good idea with the gang and stuff...try to lengthen your chapters and elaborate more of actions and stuff. ....why is highschool teaching nouns? not that i'm complaining but i know we never got that review....
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 29, 2004 17:51 CDT
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it's still good, but your chapter are sooooo short!! It took me only one minute (or even less) to read it... O.O I hope your chapters will be longer next time! Anyway, update soon ;)
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Title: fireprincess59
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 12:01 CDT
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Its me again. I'm sorry it took me a while to update but I have writer's block. **dj I'm a girl-.- hence the name fireprincess59** Well I should have the next chapter up soon.
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: Mia _mtn_ On: September 25, 2004 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs laods more chappies pleeze!! ^-^ great so far. ^-^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: dj On: September 23, 2004 14:43 CDT
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kool fic dude or dudette keep up the good work.
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Title: wwaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kitty22 On: September 23, 2004 14:41 CDT
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i hate you for not updating but that doesnt mean that i hate you hate you ^_^'please update please^_^
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Title: dtolgc
Reviewed By: tgyok On: September 23, 2004 14:39 CDT
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y wont u update!!!???
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:51 CDT
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It sounds good so far! I hope you'll update soon!
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Title: fireprincess59
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 15:24 CDT
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Sorry guys. I really messed up the first chapter. As soon as I fix it up please reread it and the second chappter.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad but needs lime or lemon
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Title: my review
Reviewed By: Mazrulz On: September 19, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
more chappies pleeze!! Maz! ps- ever heard of paragraphs. no offence, or anything though.
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