| "Untitaled ((Because I can't think of one.))" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: Needed to add more to say...
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 12:43 CST
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I did read the first chapter, and then I skipped to the last chapter. Yeah, it would probably be in your favor to go back and put spaces in between the paragraphs. ^_^ Also, you spelled confused wrong in your summary. There was a review like on the 4th page of reviews or something and they said that most people won't read the fanfic if there isn't a good title. Yes, that is true for some but sometimes people will read it anyway to send flames or just because they are giving you a chance. What I would offer for you to do is actually PUT a summary in your summary box. And, instead of putting your thoughts into the review section of your fanfic, you should put author-note chapters up so people who don't look in the review area can know whats going on in your head. I hope I'm helping you since you're not stopping with this fanfiction. But seriously, like I said in my last review: Invest in a spell checker or a beta-reader. They will SAVE YOUR FANFICTIONS every time. Believe me. When I was first writing they saved my ass 90 % of the time. Please consider my words I have said to you, not only would it make me feel good it would make a hell of a difference for you. Sincerely, RAR.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 12:31 CST
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Well I was reading a review you wrote for your own fanfic and in it, you said you could care less about spelling. Spelling is what MAKES a fanfic good. If you don't have good spelling or grammar then what is the point of writing? You can download a good spell checker off the internet and it doesn't matter if someone has the same name for a fanfic, what matters is that your fanfics are different thats all. Anyways, I'd advise in getting a spell checker. You spelled "scene" in your summary wrong. I think you spelled it "Scean" or something along those lines. Just remember, good spelling and grammar makes you look less ... unintelligent. No this is not a flame, please don't think of it as one. I'm just your friendly helper. :) Oh and if you don't want to get a spell checker I'd advise in looking around for a beta-reader. They can spell check and grammar-check for you. :D
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Title: please continue it's very good
Reviewed By: sunflashmace7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 11:45 CDT
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I think it's a good idea you got there. Your story is very good, and the fact you want to edit it a bit will only make it better. So you can count on me to re-read it and and I'll leave you comments on it ;) see ya!
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Title: fireprincess
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 20:14 CDT
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Ok, I see where you're comming from cutemoon, Kagome turned on the shower and got herself soaked. Her house was still in pretty good condition when she soaked herself. The pipes were still working, and I know where I'm comming from because this has happened to one of my best friends, and they did this to get out, ok?
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Title: fireprincess
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 10:44 CDT
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Ok, cutemoon. First off, Kagome didn't take a shower in either chapter you are referring to, she took a bath in chapter 6 because she was at Inuyasha's house, so she was able to take a bath.
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: cutemoon On: June 02, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I 've decided to redo my last review. This one is for chapter 4. I have a question. How could kagome take a shower when her house is burned by fire. It doesn't make sense.
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: cutemoon On: June 02, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is for chapter 3. I have a question. How could kagome take a shower when her house is burned by fire. I doesn't make sense.
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Reviewed By: fireprincess On: June 02, 2005 18:24 CDT
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0.0; I didn't think that it would do that..... *Ish embaressed.* I'll fix it as soon as possible...
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Reviewed By: kittenchow On: June 01, 2005 21:43 CDT
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hey! you have to continue this story!! haha please?? anyways... i just had to point this out cauz it made me laugh... "...looking at the rather bright colored shit and pants..." read it carefully!! hahah but please continue!! thank you
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:05 CDT
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So sorry I haven't been on, I've been wrapped up in other things school related. I'm working on my next chapter as I speak, so why I'm wasting time here is beyond me...
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: March 16, 2005 18:08 CST
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hey, dancingpony, she already told you that she didn't fix it because there's other fics that has the same title. She mispelled it volunteerly so it won't be the same as the others. And it's not that easy to find a title ya know. Maybe you can come up with a title easily, but maybe not her. Anyway, now, I'm reviewing for real. Well just wanna say that you didn't update for quite long and that I'm still waiting >.< update soon please?
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Reviewed By: The Dancing Pony [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:45 CST
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If you know you misspelled your title, why don't you fix it? Or better yet: Come up with a title! (*gasp* what an idea!)
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Reviewed By: The Dancing Pony [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:45 CST
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If you know you misspelled your title, why don't you fix it? Or better yet: Come up with a title! (*gasp* what an idea!)
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 23:56 CST
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mabey you should have InuYasha continue to track her down and finally she give's up but wont mave back in? and the he starts going out with her? and they fall in love? and the naraku finds her on the street? i dont kno but i love the story so far keep up the good worl and update again soon pleasE?
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