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| "Empty Sands" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: please update !!!!!
Reviewed By: RevengeKicksAss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, its just one of a kind!! Never seen anything like it, If any of you know the author ask him/her to please continue the story. I want to know what's going to happen!!!! Read it fokes! It really is great!!! I totally agree with alonegirl 34, you just have to continue, who cares if some people have issues? It's your work and a lot of people like it, they are just too embaressed to admit it! On fanfiction there are tons of these, just not with the great storyline. You have two people here who are fine with admitting it's good, its great, we love it!! ANCIENT MOKUBA KICKS ASS!!! Keep it up, you have two people who are here and begging!!! I'll never read something like this anywhere else, so continue for me!!
| Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 06:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic I hope you update it more (IF YU ADVERTISE PAIRING GIVE US PAIRING ^_^) This still is a good story line and I can't wiat to see what happens (if you want to update)
| Reviewed By: *censored* On: February 17, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is not fair that no one else reviewed your fic. (Could it be because that it was incest? And had no sex?) It is a very nice fic, and though I been out of touch with Yugioh, if what you say about Mokuba is true then it definitly isn't fair that he doesn't have an incarnation. But while I did like your story, it isn't without mistakes, and I am not the sort to give straight 10's unless its true. Unfortunatly I am starting to run out of space so I'll stop here, but I hope that others review your fic, and please write more Mokuba fics! (The world needs more Mokuba fics!)
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