| "Sukiyaki" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: crazy88 On: October 19, 2004 05:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! Please write more with Dee-sempai!
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Reviewed By: Aby-chan On: October 05, 2004 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! The characters are very much in character and it's well written. There' s a couple grammar errors, but other than that it's really cool. I like how you worked Ryo's family into it too. I don't think it's ever mentioned if he acually knows Japanese, personally I think he would know some, but then he would know the meaning of the song and it wouldn't work as well. Great job! I'm looking forward to some more of your fics in this fandom! ~Aby-chan~
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Reviewed By: sheena On: September 22, 2004 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sweet and loving! I'd also like to thank you for using this song which is one of my favorites. I'm honestly surprised that it hasn't been used before in the anime sections of fanfiction because it was so popular and is still played regularly on older stations like you have in the story. I've read some of your other stuff and I've noticed, you have real talent for writing songfics. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
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Reviewed By: cloud9Kerri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very well written. I like how you made the guys all want to just get together and hang out the way men really do. I also enjoyed showing us some of Ryo's background and giving a decent explanation of why he doesn't look very asain (with the exception of his eyes) and how, in this setting, he doesn't speak Japanese. This was very sweet and I like how you made Dee go for the romance aspect as a kind of spur of the moment thing and yet, the way you wrote, I was really able to envision Dee doing this. You are a very talented writer and I've enjoyed all your fics that I've read so far. Please continue to write more in the FAKE genre.
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