| "'Hello I Still Love You'" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: celestialmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice...-gives thumbs up- I've never really been afan of the whole slit wrist approach, but you just changed my mind. Keep it up, it was great!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:10 CST
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*waves*I'll wait forever!/Rin:Rin too!
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Title: eeeerrrrmmmm
Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 24, 2005 20:59 CST
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come on come on! where are you??? Hey! you know what's weird? we've been following eachother around because whenever i review you've reviewed ooorrrrr i review and check back and you reviewed!!!!!! woooooo wierd eh? please update? ill give ya a buck.... ^_^
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Title: It's me !!! Donna ^_^
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the beginning was so sad. could have been longer and when is the next chapter suppose to be posted. I want to know what happens next. I thought that you wanted to make yourself sound intimadating with the name mean_punk. So you changed to a nicer name. I will be waiting for your unpdate. ^_^ ja ne
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: February 18, 2005 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Just as you reviewed my story, I will review yours. You need to go through and edit it. The firt word or so on ever sentence is cut off. Other than that it seems to be good. Will it continue to be angst? Or will that change as the story continues? Please update soon, it has a lot of potential.
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 16, 2005 19:36 CST
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so... i'm guessing that you're not gonna update anymore 'cause it's been 5 months... but if you do do you think you could do me a huge favor?? could you maybe fix the spacing in the 2 chapters because the first word of every line is cut off... but i really really like the story!! so is Kagome gonna become a hanyou??? please please please update!!!!!! I'll love you forever!!
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this, although I noticed it appears like you're missing words. I find that if that's happening you should use a Tab or put a cople of spaces before each line. But anyways, like I said, very good. I liked it a lot
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done you've gotten my curosity roused. i look foward to you next chapter. Sincerly, Kage Hogosha:)
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Title: Yes
Reviewed By: MY On: September 22, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it thought it was cool kinda confusing tho
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Reviewed By: the dam author of this story but not signed in On: September 22, 2004 14:55 CDT
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RAYNA!!! ^_^ sry but you kno i dont have long distance so you have to call me but not today i'm sick i litterly threw up at school i had to run out of the classroom!
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Title: ...........(speechless)
Reviewed By: Rayna(neko-hanyou) On: September 21, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!!!!!!!!Awesome, although i never really thought of you as a writer, but hey. Whatever. Good Job Sam. Gimme a call. No other reasons than that i'm bored and haven't spoken with you in a while and so that you can tell me what sparked the idea to write. I'm quite impressed. P.S- you do realize that my reviews will get more strict, right? Improve and learn as you go. I know good work when I read it. Keep it up. ~Rayna~ (lepreecaun girl,tree squirrel, playtapus, monkey, short person, monkey/person, neko-hanyou) if I missed any, let me know. love ya~ttyl
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Reviewed By: aquablueflamedragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:39 CDT
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oops, guess i forgot i was still on your sn Sam ^^; that was me lmao
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:34 CDT
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Title: Ooooooooo...love it!
Reviewed By: COOKIE! On: September 21, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Sam...this is great! I loved it! That would be sweet if there was an actual episode of Inuyasha based on this! Good job! ...COOKIE!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:03 CDT
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lmao, my friend came up w/ the "monkies, bunnies, and birdies, but most importantly birrrdie omelettes" and another friend recently added the "tomato sauce and ketchup and root beer on top" i've been saying it ever since it was created, about a year ago lol. anyways.. yea, im the editor, Susan ^^
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