| "'Hello I Still Love You'" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: N20000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting concept. I rather enjoyed this. Good job!
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Title: Mwahaha!
Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i'm giving you an honest rating because 1)that's how I am and 2) you're honest with me ^_^ Originality got a 5 because to be honest I've seen the 'slit-wrists and Inuyasha saves me' Kagome style story repetitively. However, not everyone had him catch her before she could really do herself in. Style and spelling kinda went hand in hand due to the content and I felt it could have been written a little better. Perhaps a bit more depth into what she was thinking during and after seeing them kiss. I did enjoy reading it though and would probably enjoy it further if you were to go a bit more in depth with the characters. Don't be afraid to show us every detail if you feel like writing it. Lastly... This isn't meant as a slight at all, but I would recommend either not writing lemons, or rewording them instead of just blantant "tab A into slot B"... This last chapter just had a very rushed feeling to it like it didn't really belong or you didn't want to write it. Well, hope I haven't ticked ya off lol I'm still willing to let ya write the Solitude sequels ^_^ so that outta tell ya what I think about your writing. Until later chica!
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: author of betrothed On: July 20, 2005 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU WROTE A PORN. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I'm just playing. I haven't emailed you because I lost your email. I loved the end of your story by the way. send your mail adress to ladonna@sailormoon.com. YOU GOT A JOB!!!!!!!! I'm so envious. I've been looking for a job all summer. but that's okay. I got a gold 2004 taurus.:) jane.
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Title: Hello I still Love you
Reviewed By: Kagome 123321 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you think u could make another lemon because, i really like inukag lemons.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: InuYashaKagome_rock_my_socks_off [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story!!!!!!
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Title: tiny snow fairy_999 is really I Just Wanna Live
Reviewed By: Tiny Snow Fairy_999 On: May 23, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: ????
Reviewed By: Tiny Snow Fairy_999 On: May 23, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok lil missy! What if i don't wanna seperate my chapters! But still thanx 4 telling me it wz gewd. I reckon. Well...cya l8er Font Color
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton* am i ever logged on?* On: May 12, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! Awsomely awsome! you should definately write another!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (You might want to go back and fix the first two chapters cause of spacing but you can still understand it...) thankyou soooooo much for finishing! just for future reference if you really want to contact me you can look me up in authors search... GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice one shots. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Just a sister On: May 06, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. The beginning was a little scary at first and not to mention sad. But as it went on, I found myself very interested. I love the whole ending how they expressed their love and I'm glad that things went well for them. Your very talented and I do hope that you write more fanfics. I'll keep an eye out for them.
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Reviewed By: The dumb one... On: May 06, 2005 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sam!!!! That was so good! I loved it. I didn't know you were that creative. It was amazing and very "grabbing" if you know what I mean. I loved the last part, didn't think you had that in you. All in all, I say that was a pretty good story and anyone who thinks other wise should be... Anyway, you should write more fics. I'd love to read more!
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Reviewed By: i_stole_your_milk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story....and um yeah i have enjoyed reading it so far=) and i hope you write more storys oh yeah.. thanx for the reveiw!!!!(on my story and that was the first chapter..but its just messed..sorry)
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Title: WHEEEEEE!!!!
Reviewed By: fenris fenrir (I THOUGHT I LOGGED IN!!!) On: March 23, 2005 15:07 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! it was reeeeele good! Thanks for reviewing for my fic, i'll update soon...I hope... So yeah. My screen name is shukumeinamonai, so you can talk to me through that... yeah. WHEEEEE!!!!! *leaves to get more chocolate*
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 13, 2005 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhh, another chapter! Thanks for the rather, ah, ***inspiring*** conclusion! ::sends over 2 boxes o' pocky:: Your muse is going to have you continue this, eh? Songfic or straight story/text line, I'll be looking out for more goodies from you. The other night I'd read a story which tore our beloved Inuyasha and Kagome apart; though well written, it still left me vastly uncomfortable, and in need of some *goood* Inu/Kag fic where their profound bond keeps them together. Thanks for this as well. :) All better! :)
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 08:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Very angsty, but Chapt.2 is verrrrry kawaii. Please consider reigniting your muse for *your* readers. ;) Oh, re: that "Betrothed" fic you'd mentioned--which series, author, for MM's returning several similar titles.
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