| "'Hello I Still Love You'" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tiny Snow Fairy_999 On: May 23, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok lil missy! What if i don't wanna seperate my chapters! But still thanx 4 telling me it wz gewd. I reckon. Well...cya l8er Font Color
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton* am i ever logged on?* On: May 12, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! Awsomely awsome! you should definately write another!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (You might want to go back and fix the first two chapters cause of spacing but you can still understand it...) thankyou soooooo much for finishing! just for future reference if you really want to contact me you can look me up in authors search... GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice one shots. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Just a sister On: May 06, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. The beginning was a little scary at first and not to mention sad. But as it went on, I found myself very interested. I love the whole ending how they expressed their love and I'm glad that things went well for them. Your very talented and I do hope that you write more fanfics. I'll keep an eye out for them.
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Reviewed By: The dumb one... On: May 06, 2005 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sam!!!! That was so good! I loved it. I didn't know you were that creative. It was amazing and very "grabbing" if you know what I mean. I loved the last part, didn't think you had that in you. All in all, I say that was a pretty good story and anyone who thinks other wise should be... Anyway, you should write more fics. I'd love to read more!
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Reviewed By: i_stole_your_milk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story....and um yeah i have enjoyed reading it so far=) and i hope you write more storys oh yeah.. thanx for the reveiw!!!!(on my story and that was the first chapter..but its just messed..sorry)
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Title: WHEEEEEE!!!!
Reviewed By: fenris fenrir (I THOUGHT I LOGGED IN!!!) On: March 23, 2005 15:07 CST
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yay! it was reeeeele good! Thanks for reviewing for my fic, i'll update soon...I hope... So yeah. My screen name is shukumeinamonai, so you can talk to me through that... yeah. WHEEEEE!!!!! *leaves to get more chocolate*
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 13, 2005 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhh, another chapter! Thanks for the rather, ah, ***inspiring*** conclusion! ::sends over 2 boxes o' pocky:: Your muse is going to have you continue this, eh? Songfic or straight story/text line, I'll be looking out for more goodies from you. The other night I'd read a story which tore our beloved Inuyasha and Kagome apart; though well written, it still left me vastly uncomfortable, and in need of some *goood* Inu/Kag fic where their profound bond keeps them together. Thanks for this as well. :) All better! :)
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 08:09 CST
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Very angsty, but Chapt.2 is verrrrry kawaii. Please consider reigniting your muse for *your* readers. ;) Oh, re: that "Betrothed" fic you'd mentioned--which series, author, for MM's returning several similar titles.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: celestialmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice...-gives thumbs up- I've never really been afan of the whole slit wrist approach, but you just changed my mind. Keep it up, it was great!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:10 CST
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*waves*I'll wait forever!/Rin:Rin too!
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Title: eeeerrrrmmmm
Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 24, 2005 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
come on come on! where are you??? Hey! you know what's weird? we've been following eachother around because whenever i review you've reviewed ooorrrrr i review and check back and you reviewed!!!!!! woooooo wierd eh? please update? ill give ya a buck.... ^_^
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Title: It's me !!! Donna ^_^
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the beginning was so sad. could have been longer and when is the next chapter suppose to be posted. I want to know what happens next. I thought that you wanted to make yourself sound intimadating with the name mean_punk. So you changed to a nicer name. I will be waiting for your unpdate. ^_^ ja ne
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: February 18, 2005 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just as you reviewed my story, I will review yours. You need to go through and edit it. The firt word or so on ever sentence is cut off. Other than that it seems to be good. Will it continue to be angst? Or will that change as the story continues? Please update soon, it has a lot of potential.
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 16, 2005 19:36 CST
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so... i'm guessing that you're not gonna update anymore 'cause it's been 5 months... but if you do do you think you could do me a huge favor?? could you maybe fix the spacing in the 2 chapters because the first word of every line is cut off... but i really really like the story!! so is Kagome gonna become a hanyou??? please please please update!!!!!! I'll love you forever!!
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