| "Harbored Deep Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Title: GU TIME YET?XD
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute on the hugging scene.But man,the way you described aura,she sounds beautiful!but when can we exspect the GU scenes?
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Reviewed By: Matt Gross On: December 19, 2007 11:08 CST
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This is a very good story. I never thought that I would see a story where Shugo and Aura have sex with each other online.
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Reviewed By: Shinrai raku On: July 04, 2006 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! yay! i'm so glad you finished it! ^o^ (and i'm still hoping for more) GU looks awesome and i would love it if you could put Haseo somewhere in there o.- have you seen .hack//roots yet? they talked about aura in one episode ^-^ swqee!
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Reviewed By: KakashiRulez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 04:25 CDT
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heh... only thing i can say is wow... its a really romantic!!! Neways please do update, its been ages! lol i cant wait for more... and thanks again! plz do ur best to finish this im tired of waiting!!! lol (dont wanna give a rating yet cause its not done...)
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Title: Cumulative Response
Reviewed By: TerraChrono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 00:17 CDT
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Hyou, Should you ever return to this page, ever read this story again, please post a second review containing your e-mail address. I would like to speak with you personally about an important matter. To all future readers and reviewers, If you decide to write a review, please construct them similarly to Hyou's, in that they explain in what area I need to improve in. I love getting complements on my writing, but I love it even more when you tell me what I can fix or make better. To all frequenters, By popular demand, more is coming. Be patient, however, as new developments will not occur until after the release of G.U. For those of you out-of-the-loop, this means at least not until the fall, and most likely during the winter. For everyone, Thank you for reading, and for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the show.
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Reviewed By: Hyou On: May 23, 2006 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
now i've noticed you've gotten many, as i like to call them, "sugar coated reviews" giving you 10 out of 10's. i'm not saying you've got that certain something, it's just there is much more to desire. i liked the second chapter a little better than the first, i love a good romance, if it were only a little more creative. don't mind the 7, it's just i've seen much better writing (don't worry, you're doing fine). anyway, you've stayed true to the storyline and added alot of your own stuff, good. keep up your enthusiasm. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Dragonkiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn wat the hell took u soo long to update man well its ok as long as u keep updating like the longer version of chap 2 keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: why do you want to know?! On: March 03, 2006 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i had to sum this story up to one word it would be wonderful it is one of if not the best .hack// fics i have ever had the plesure of reading unlike all thous other fics/lemons this one has depth not just sex. keep it up i love it. ~bows down to your greatness
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: KerosAohco6745 On: February 28, 2006 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very original and creative piece of work. The first chapter was... interesting, but I like the second best. I'm a sucker for romance. I hope to read more of your work in the future. Please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Arc-Angel_of_Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 11:27 CST
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continue this story plz its so cool
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: sephiorth_jtp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 22:00 CST
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what can i say i really liked it (*O*)
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Reviewed By: sweetums [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 15:11 CDT
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OO Wow. That was great! The Lemony goodness was overwhelming....I have never read a good lemon fic in a long time. GREAT JOB! And the seccond chapter? ARE YOU GONNA WRITE MORE OR WHAT?!?!?!?! Please tell me that you're gonna write more. It was really good. So very sweet and lemony. Delicious...okies. Thankyou! For now, Ja Ne!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 09, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cool. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TwinBladeZero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic! I may like Aura/Shugo pairings but I really would have preferred an Ouka/Shugo pairing.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Reviewed By: Shinrai On: October 04, 2004 21:04 CDT
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>.< You gotta write more!! I've been waiting for Soooooooooooooooooo long for a Aura/Shuugo fic!! I can't believe that your's is the only one! So, keep on writing and show those .hack fans!! >.
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