| "Fathomless Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ravenna's Soul On: August 05, 2005 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stares at black eagle* ok, that was a little bit cruel. i really like it, cuz its one of my favorite pairings, but that was still cruel. especially if there isnt anything that comes after this. please * chibi puppy dog eyes* please write more!
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Title: delie
Reviewed By: silly kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so great! i luv it! adorable kira! luv how well u express his emotions! and how he wondered if he was gay and thought about there childhood! but i didnt like the running into the forest thing. aside from that i was totally caught up in the moment and almost started to cry my self! (i know i know! im a very emotional girl) lol plz write more kira and athren luver stories!
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Fox (not signed in...) On: March 26, 2005 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very, ver nice! Is it just me, or did I really saw that the status of this fic completed? Anyway, I hope to read more of your work. Keep it up! =^_^=V
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: BlackGreyRoses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a good idea, and I'm dyin to know what happens next! Update soon please!^^
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 03:32 CST
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wahhhh. how sad and gut-wrenching
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Reviewed By: Yuki Vela On: November 28, 2004 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's relly creative and one of my favorites. I look forward to your nexts chapter.Bye!
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!! great chapter so far!! i cant wait to read the next one!! update sooon and keep up thr great work!! ViciousVamp
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Title: VampiricAssassins
Reviewed By: PhantomDark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved your fan fic athruna dn kira are the best couples forget about dumb sluty ole flay!!!! i hate to beg and i shall not stoope so low as to do so but............PLEASSSSSSSSEEEEEE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyLuck1006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Athrun/Kira are one of the best couples ever. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: LadyCain On: October 20, 2004 19:16 CDT
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you have to keep writing, it's a lot harder than i thought to find G-SEED fics and now i want to know what happens. PLEEEEASE keep writing.
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Reviewed By: exodiay On: September 26, 2004 20:15 CDT
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I loved it you have a great style of writing and i thought you wrote athrun and Kiras very well it's hard finding a good athrun kira story since I don't think gundam seed is very well known yet but I think you did a great job and I hope you continue this it was very evil where you left off
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Reviewed By: Exodiay On: September 26, 2004 20:14 CDT
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I loved it you have a great style of writing and i thought you wrote athrun and Kiras very well it's finding a good athrun kira story since I don't think gundam seed is very well known yet but I think you did a great job and I hope you continue this it was very evil where you left off
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Title: Vampireotaku & Oceana
Reviewed By: A dark and a light On: September 22, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oceana: its very nice...i like it very much. its so hard to find any gseed yaoi fiction Vampireotaku: you're so very right ana-chan. oh...::licks lips:: love the pairing darling and what's this? a possible lemon epilogue? ::yaoi fangirl eyes:: how very yummy. Oceana:i'm very interested with where you're going with this. is the next chapter going to be in athrun's pov? Vampireotaku: ::eyes glint:: oh you just must darling...i'll just die if i can't partake of the naughty yaoi thoughts of athrun concerning kira. mmmm...delicious. Oceana: okay...i have reviewed. so you'll finish...right? Vampireotaku: FINISH! or...::evil cackles fade into the distance.:: Both: KIRA IS THE BEST CHARACTER!!!!!!
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Title: and my other half, Vampireotaku
Reviewed By: Oceana On: September 22, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oceana: its very nice...i like it very much. its so hard to find any gseed yaoi fiction Vampireotaku: you're so very right ana-chan. oh...::licks lips:: love the pairing darling and what's this? a possible lemon epilogue? ::yaoi fangirl eyes:: how very yummy. Oceana:i'm very interested with where you're going with this. is the next chapter going to be in athrun's pov? Vampireotaku: ::eyes glint:: oh you just must darling...i'll just die if i can't partake of the naughty yaoi thoughts of athrun concerning kira. mmmm...delicious. Oceana: okay...i have reviewed. so you'll finish...right? Vampireotaku: FINISH! or...::evil cackles fade into the distance.:: Both: KIRA IS THE BEST CHARACTER!!!!!!
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Title: and my other half, Vampireotaku
Reviewed By: Oceana On: September 22, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oceana: its very nice...i like it very much. its so hard to find any gseed yaoi fiction Vampireotaku: you're so very right ana-chan. oh...::licks lips:: love the pairing darling and what's this? a possible lemon epilogue? ::yaoi fangirl eyes:: how very yummy. Oceana:i'm very interested with where you're going with this. is the next chapter going to be in athrun's pov? Vampireotaku: ::eyes glint:: oh you just must darling...i'll just die if i can't partake of the naughty yaoi thoughts of athrun concerning kira. mmmm...delicious. Oceana: okay...i have reviewed. so you'll finish...right? Vampireotaku: FINISH! or...::evil cackles fade into the distance.:: Both: KIRA IS THE BEST CHARACTER!!!!!!
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