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Title: GOOD
Reviewed By: furin_a [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH GOD KIRA IS SO POOR TT ^ TT update please..I want to read what will happen on the next chapter ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Chichiris Life-Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really well wrote I'm Impressed the grammer and the spelling was done very well. And though it may not have any plot lol who necassarily says that's a bad thing I've always adored PWP particularly between KiraXAthuran. So keep up the good work and please wite the lemon epiloge for all us Yaoi smut fans out there lol. Saraba.
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Reviewed By: Lighted Shadows On: August 09, 2005 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
gah!!! please update so that we can find out what happens to kira! *wanders off, crying and muttering about how cruel it would be to be left hanging while being stared at by her slightly disterbed muses*
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Reviewed By: Ravenna's Soul On: August 05, 2005 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stares at black eagle* ok, that was a little bit cruel. i really like it, cuz its one of my favorite pairings, but that was still cruel. especially if there isnt anything that comes after this. please * chibi puppy dog eyes* please write more!
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Title: delie
Reviewed By: silly kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so great! i luv it! adorable kira! luv how well u express his emotions! and how he wondered if he was gay and thought about there childhood! but i didnt like the running into the forest thing. aside from that i was totally caught up in the moment and almost started to cry my self! (i know i know! im a very emotional girl) lol plz write more kira and athren luver stories!
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Fox (not signed in...) On: March 26, 2005 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very, ver nice! Is it just me, or did I really saw that the status of this fic completed? Anyway, I hope to read more of your work. Keep it up! =^_^=V
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: BlackGreyRoses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a good idea, and I'm dyin to know what happens next! Update soon please!^^
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 03:32 CST
Comment/Review:
wahhhh. how sad and gut-wrenching
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Reviewed By: Yuki Vela On: November 28, 2004 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's relly creative and one of my favorites. I look forward to your nexts chapter.Bye!
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!! great chapter so far!! i cant wait to read the next one!! update sooon and keep up thr great work!! ViciousVamp
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Title: VampiricAssassins
Reviewed By: PhantomDark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved your fan fic athruna dn kira are the best couples forget about dumb sluty ole flay!!!! i hate to beg and i shall not stoope so low as to do so but............PLEASSSSSSSSEEEEEE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyLuck1006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Athrun/Kira are one of the best couples ever. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: LadyCain On: October 20, 2004 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
you have to keep writing, it's a lot harder than i thought to find G-SEED fics and now i want to know what happens. PLEEEEASE keep writing.
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Reviewed By: exodiay On: September 26, 2004 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it you have a great style of writing and i thought you wrote athrun and Kiras very well it's hard finding a good athrun kira story since I don't think gundam seed is very well known yet but I think you did a great job and I hope you continue this it was very evil where you left off
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Reviewed By: Exodiay On: September 26, 2004 20:14 CDT
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I loved it you have a great style of writing and i thought you wrote athrun and Kiras very well it's finding a good athrun kira story since I don't think gundam seed is very well known yet but I think you did a great job and I hope you continue this it was very evil where you left off
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