| "whispered voices" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: This is weird
Reviewed By: Mmoirai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 02:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ummmm...you might consider re-writing your Rin/Sess story, because it seems an "awful lot" like another one I've read that was posted before yours on this site and on another site. That suggests the "P" word on someone's part!
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Compelling. I sure hope you write more of these. I usually do not read 1st person pov, but this was great. I felt like I was there.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 02:11 CDT
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that was some REALLY hot shit there, man. It\'s got me all hot and bothered... I\'ve read so much of this stuff the last few months that it rarely affects me anymore, but yours still did. You\'ve got a nack for lemons! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! you probably don't check this anymore...but I thought your fic was great! It was a bit reminiscent of mariangela's stuff, but you had your own personal flare, too. Great Job. Your grammar, spelling, and writing style are really good! I'll be looking to see what other fics you've written :)!
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Title: oooh UPDATE!`
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOH! I loved it please update FAST!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
uhmmmm.... maybe you should change a few stuff from the rin and sess thing coz it looks a wee bit conspicuous from innocent beginings
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Reviewed By: mkk7005 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I do believe Innocent Beginings was written first.
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Title: Your love scene
Reviewed By: mkk7005 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
The dialogue between Rin and Sess during the love scene seems very familiar to Innocent Beginings prologue. You should check it out! It is uncanny how similiar they are.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heheh...me want more Inu-Kag smut!! More please...I kinda like the vignette style...kinda like polaroid pictures of the relationships and significant moments. :)
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