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| "Lunar Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: crystal_clear_13 On: May 18, 2005 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories i have ever read. I like way this story is so toghther, so solid. Over all it was great! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: LB On: December 11, 2004 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to find such a solid fic about Athrun and Kira. Adore this fic, and the characterization of not just Athrun and Kira, but everyone else. Also love the idea of Kira's hair being "chocolate brown" and the fact that Athrun was so fixated on his eyes. Truly a brilliant piece of writing, thanks for sharing!
| Reviewed By: Precognition74 On: November 30, 2004 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting! apparently Kira was afraid of the discrimination, he's actually pretty smart, leading the teachers on like that. maybe we'll see him crying, athrun did afterall say that kira ' cries easily' in the show ^_^
| Reviewed By: I like this! On: November 10, 2004 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent story! It's going on my favourite list!
| Reviewed By: Andrew Saier On: September 27, 2004 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. Written as if it was told through the eyes of a seven or eight year old, situations that the reader can understand and the main character can't. I liked how the author included the predescesor (spelled wrong, I think) of Torii, or in America "Birdy". There's also some interesting things, like some reasons why Patrick Zala would be against Naturals, and the first anti-Natural feelings in Athrun. Also, we see first hand how normal people view Coordinators. Most of the time we just get Blue Cosmos guys or people who should be in Blue Cosmos. Here, even normal people don't like Athrun: they might join Blue Cosmos when they grow up. Also, those second graders are viscious, beating up poor Athrun like that. Also a good example of reasons againt Naturals. I also liked the thought that math was just a few simple concepts that can be combined into thousands of different ways. Keep writing!
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