| "Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 01:02 CST
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WOW! That was so beautiful! I loved the description and the character emotions were quite vivid. Quite a wonderfully done one-shot!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: July 08, 2007 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a lovely piece. The story had great flow. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 00:23 CDT
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interesting story... enjoyed reading it... good work!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, something new and your writing style is great, I hope you write another down the road where Kag is finally his!
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Reviewed By: anti-kikyou gerl On: December 27, 2005 09:03 CST
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how cute. i have to say , those two sure blushed a lot.
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Title: KYA-SU
Reviewed By: Inuchan808 On: December 26, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-SUUUUUUUUU!!!!!! That's so adorable!!! Please update soon or I'll be forced to smack you with a 1 pound bag of oranges!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 01:41 CDT
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very well done story. i'm sad to see it end there. very kawaii! that dude...man...what a prick. shi...damn...i would love to know just what inu did to him and how many peices of him were strung out about the forest. so well written. very, very good!!! keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHH you evil evil person you! Great story but did you have to end it like that?
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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 16:07 CDT
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Hey you should really think about writing some more! This is a really good start for a story, so you should finish it! Besides, shouldn't every story have a REAL ending? I really think you should write more!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 22:51 CST
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Cool. Lovely one shot. This could have been expanded to become a continuation, but it works really well as a one shot. I'm not going to tell you to expand it, because people keep telling me that and it drives me crazy. Well, excellent, and I loved it. its nice to see inuyasha weak for once, seeing as he almost never is. Well, until you write again, great job.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: February 07, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! you should continue this! it's greaT!!!!! +)))))
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Reviewed By: dyamm On: January 28, 2005 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..really gud!!
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Reviewed By: Jay Girl On: January 15, 2005 12:08 CST
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Simple and kawaii one-shot that describes the relationship so nicely! I liked the little bunny thing and the part at the end where he does claim her as "Mine." Good job and keep the stories coming! :O)
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Reviewed By: femalemonk On: November 07, 2004 19:39 CST
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awww!! that's such a cute story!!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that story was fuckin awsome if i new bigger better words i would so use them lol but ya it was fucking great and my fav kind of story ^_^ the kind where i dont have to fuckin wait for an ending ^_^ man if i could really rate this id give it a 100 lol ^_^ everything was perfect ^-^
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 08:23 CDT
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I like this story! Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: ShanTheHam On: October 20, 2004 21:04 CDT
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One word, Excellent.
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Reviewed By: _mordsith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good fic, but i'd suggest reviewing your spelling and grammar a lot more before posting. it was distracting from the story when the grammar was just bad or the words you used were out of context (ie "ambiguous anger"). but otherwise, very enjoyable! hope to see more.
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Reviewed By: gothchick414 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 06:49 CDT
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Wow, that was awesome, but like they said, the spelling leaves much to be desired. And...HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE! CLIFF HANGARS ARE EVIL! lol! please write more!
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Reviewed By: DeadBHunter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY! you should make it longer than just a one-shot, im PRETTY sure it said one-shot, but not positive...
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Reviewed By: sorry not logged in On: September 28, 2004 00:39 CDT
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Your spelling and grammatical errors really detract from what could be a nice one shot. I would really suggest that you ask around and try to find one or two. The more the better. Good luck and keep writing
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Reviewed By: Angel284 On: September 22, 2004 22:33 CDT
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hey...nice story...keep up the good work...hope to read more soon.....update soon...:P
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