| "Up Hill Battle ((second part of All Down Hill From Here))" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: weareghost [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so so great! you left it off at the most suspenseful part too. AND YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN FOREVER! it's seriously really good. please update soon. and i read your rewrite of the first chapter, i like the rewriter better. it's really cool. :]
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 21:43 CST
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You so rock You finally updated. I really liked that chapter it was great. I loved the part with her bro kai i thought that was way too funny. I couldn't breath I was laughing so hard. Oh and i wonder what hiei had to tell kurama? Okay I was so expecting keiko to slap him not jordan but either way it was great. He so deserved it even if it wasn't totally his fault. I think you should get a beta cause you only made minor spelling mistakes other than that it was incredible. Oh and don't forget to email me every once and awhile. Can't wait till it gets to the harry potter part. Please update soon cause I gotta know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: Sakura-chan90 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:09 CST
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YAY YOUR FINNALLY UPDATING!!!!! -^__^- I see that Yusuke is starting to remember who Jordan is.I want to know what happens next soooooooooooo UPDATE!!!!! *stomps feet and does a split hurting herself in the process* OW DAMN IT! THAT WAS DUMB! Anyway, I hope you update soon love ya! Sincerely,Sakura-chan
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Reviewed By: Sakura-chan90 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:06 CST
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WAH! WHY ARENT YOU UPDATING!!!!! ITS TEARING ME APART!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! Sincerely,Sakura-chan ( also known as LilSakura87)
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Title: Yay I finally Reviewed
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is turning out great I love it. Your writing skills are improving. Lol which is more than i can say for my own. Sorry it took me so long for me to review but my computers been acting stupid. oh man i hate that when you can't think of something but you know that its right there on the tip of your tongue man that bugs me. I can't believe they just missed each other in like 2.5 secs yusuke would have seen jordan. Oh well *sigh* Thanks for thanking me and i hadn't even reviewed yet lol. Hope to hear from you soon and please update asap. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: LoVin_HiEi_3eYes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 22:17 CST
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No problem you deserved it. Well write soon mL!
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Reviewed By: JustNorMaL On: December 10, 2004 22:13 CST
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thank you! please update soon! I Love Your fanfiction!!!
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Reviewed By: BooiSeeU On: December 10, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the props ='] i feel special! well update soon i loved ur chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: FoxDemonNikki On: December 08, 2004 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked it. Update
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Title: teehee
Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 22:44 CST
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I gave you that Youko thing in our roleplaying... and the Keiko thing... god did I give you all of this? I feel so good about myself now!!! ^_^ luv you keep updating! ::..LoR..::
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Reviewed By: CoRpOrAtEd On: December 05, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kick ass fanfic you have here...write more as soon as you can..aight...late!~
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Reviewed By: JustNorMaL On: December 02, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you wrote your fanfic...and how Yusuke and Jordan meet again...it's quite sad what happened, and yeah I just wanted to say I like your fanfic I think it is one of my favorites that I actually wrote a review for...so this is my first review...:) yeah. So please write more! Thanks...
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Reviewed By: BooiSeeU On: December 02, 2004 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...........omigosh................I LOVE IT! hahahaha....write more you are excellent!!! cant wait to see what happens!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: LoVin_HiEi_3eYes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUPER FANFIC!!!! I am so frikin glad you updated!!!! PLEASE update soon!!!!!! I love your fan fiction!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LoLove On: December 02, 2004 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated!!!! woo hoo!!! you are so awesome!!! please update sooon!
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