| "Run Away Puppy" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Sex Buddy
Reviewed By: Celeste Bellow On: July 20, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 5 was really good esspecilly the cliffhanger that you left. For the next chapter you star it by Joey and Seto having sex, then have everyone come into Seto room and see them having sex on the bed. Then have Joey and Seto confess there love for each ohter in front of everyone who saw them having sex. *^_^*This sould be relly good*^_^*I hope you finish soon. Let the love of Joey & Seto finily shin in the light.
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Reviewed By: ice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 15:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
you have to story on ff.n can you upload it to here so I can read the lemons? plases & thank you!
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Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Well it is a very good story thats all i have to say at the moment. Plus it was very cute with seto and joey.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pardon the very bad pun, but ya left me "howlin" for more. Will you continue? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yukiko_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
look good as a fics :P i neede more of it and soon !
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: September 24, 2004 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work the story is great!im the mage and when i review a story people know its going to be a hit!so keep writing. i'll get all my friends to read it!!
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOHHHHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I'M THE FIRST TO REVIEW! YAY! Anyways, I like the fact that Joey was already with Kaiba to begin with. I also wanted to know if I could borrow the whole dog collar name tag thing. Only I will make the info different. K? Update Soon. ^-^ They are such a cute couple.
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