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| "Checkmate" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous. Utterly, utterly fabulous. After reading the last line, the thought I came away with, was that this was an extremely unusual love story - yes, there was the whole 'demon conquering captured female' thing, but it all got wonderfully twisted, and then the ending was the biggest twist of all: love and eternal togetherness was declared, but in a completely oppositional way - like a declaration of battle, literally. The result was dualistic, and I loved it. You have an amazing crafting ability in your writing talent. I hope you do more in this style. Sayonara, and good luck! [P.S. I don't believe this story needs a continuation. It would be interesting to know what happens, but it would be a million chapters long if it were to be written, ne? ^^ Anyway, it seemed to me to be complete in and of itself as it is.]
| Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 01:53 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, a very good one shot. a human overpowered the great sesshy. ever think of doing a second part to this to let us know how her plan went? you know maybe another one shot type, years down the road explaining what happened to her and sesshy. that would be very good.
| Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW O_O is it really a one shot :( poor sessho never saw it coming lol. way to go 5 stars. more please even if it another one shot. it just makes you wonder what she does to him later in life let me know when u do anothe sessho fic
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