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| "Fade and Flare" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan (not logged in) On: January 13, 2010 15:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah! Was so happy to see an update on this, its one of my fav fics ever ^^ Oooh no! I knew things were going too well to be true! Baka Inu, this is so like him!! Well I'll just have to hold on and cheer Kagome on to get him back ^^ Btw, loved the lemon in the previous chapter, with Kagome and Inu at the window? Yummy, and the discription was spot on ^^ Sorry to hear life isn't going too well. I'm sending you good vibes, and will wait patiently for the next update ^^
| Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: lyiint [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 09:53 PST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations Pinku, your story "Fade and Flare" has been nominated in Best Lemon at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! Lyiint ^_^
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 01:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great that that you are writing again!!! InuYasha's Running and jumping is just like the anime/manga... (except for the difference in surroundings...lol)
| Title: Review continued
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 13:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, some of it cut off... Pocari Sweat is the shizzle :P Well, I can't seem to put much more into words how much I loved your fic- so I'll just finish up with A HUGE arigatou, and good luck for the next chapter! Your new number one fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan P.S. Checked out your site- god damn, a fantastic writer AND artist? Some chicks have it all ;)
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10/10 doesn't even begin to describe how much i enjoyed this fic! It's been a while since I've read a good old Inu/Kag, especially an AU, but damn I'm glad I did!! ^.^ I sat and read this fic non stop for about four hours, and I'm still craving more! The plot flows seamlessly from one chapter to the next; the characters, especially Kagome and Inuyasha, are portrayed beautifully and slot easily into their AU roles; and the the descriptions and simply wonderfully!! You tap into the readers' senses, pulling them body and soul into your world. Kagome's dilemmas became my own; Inuyasha's fight to control his desires thrummed through my own veins! What I loved, apart from the sheer originality of you plot, (despite the star/boss genre being bogged down wth Inuyasha fiction) was the characterisation of Hojo. God knows he's an easy scape goat, and I've used him myself in fics, but never before have I read such a story in which Kagome is the one so devout in love. It's so easy to convey Hojo as the one with unrelenting feelings, yet you turn this convention on its head, and still make it sublime. Now, for the good bit!! ;) Ah, the sexual tension! How I love it! From the physical easiness Kagome and Inuyasha share from the start, to the hanyou's knowledge of her underwear, the pressure began to rise like a pan of water left on the stove too long!!! And boy, when it got steamy, it sure did!! And I certainly can't wait for more! I also love your own personal input of your knowledge of Japan- there's nothing more solidifying to a fic when an author knows her stuff! I was in Japan this June myself (Osaka hehe) and it brightened my heart when you dropped little tibbets about the country with such finesse! Oh, and Pocari Sweat
| Title: Conssume pringles?? hows that taste
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 08:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll repeat myself, it's always been worth the wait. Its always like a special surprise when the update notices come into my email box. I feel like Kouga's showing up soon, which should be funny.
| Title: Conssume pringles?? hows that taste
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 08:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll repeat myself, it's always been worth the wait. Its always like a special surprise when the update notices come into my email box. I feel like Kouga's showing up soon, which should be funny.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 20:36 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: yashielover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!! I have been waiting for a chapter for several months and I'm going to go nuts if you don't update.
| Reviewed By: Gillster On: June 19, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i just read this,it was so good. ur an amazing writer.i hope u write a sequal. u r my new favorite writer.
| Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!! I have to say this is definitely going on my list of favourites!! I havent read a story with like this before and I'm really enjoying it... Im looking forward to how they're going to handel the media.. and I must say the citrus is really reallly good.. IM looking forward to the next chappies.. Keep up the AMAZING work:D:D
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 02:45 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...this is a great fic!!! and the last few citrusy chapters were simply devine!!! The last chapter was just too hot for words....seriously think I need a cold shower after that!! please, PLEASE tell me that this is an abandoned fic!! I so want to see where this is going, and how they are going to resolve her media circus mishap!!
| Title: Wonderful Chapter
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 22:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done for a lemon chapter. I really enjoyed it. And the hilarity ensued...priceless. Lol! I'm glad you wrote this chapter. ^_^
| Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't tell you how much I've been enjoying this, and that's saying something considering I don't read that many AUs. Hojo is just - perfect - always thinking he knows best and acting impulsively without taking anyone else into consideration. I was so glad when Kagome finally realized she'd had enough, and that she really didn't love him any more (if she ever truly did). InuYasha is great - gruff and rude but still caring and very protective of the girl in his charge. Miroku is still his hentai self - though intelligent and good at his job, and Sango is well-suited in her role as Kagome's assistant and friend. I did feel sorry for both Kagome and InuYasha there for a bit - she was so confused, and made him so in the process. At least they're finally sort of working things out, even if InuYasha is worried he'll hold her back - so typical of his character. Really good work, and I look forward to your next update. BTW, your art is fabulous, too!
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