| "Father Figure" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Father Figure
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Father Figure
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 22:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this Story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 01:27 CST
Comment/Review:
yet another smut filled story. i hope this one gets updated soon. very good. i'd write more, but i don't have time to.
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Reviewed By: sesshy101 On: December 02, 2004 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sesshy101 On: November 30, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must update.YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!Or ill send my evil flying llamas to raid your fridge! MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Father Figure
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 21, 2004 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Father Figure
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 01:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the song poor kag as i said before please update the next chappie soon. (sessho) no dont and just say you did please dont let her read anymore and get mad at me again {yasha} do i get to kill him??? i want to kill him after what he did to my kagome [kag] stop you fools its just a fanfic (sessho) and how do you know whats going on [kag blushes] i... i uh :me: i let her read it got a problem? (sessho) no my ladylove {yasha} but...but he...he...:me sighs: i know and he'll pay for it later :grins evilly: (S) O_O help please..... keep up the good work and everyone please write your reviews so the next chappie will go up :) please i'd like to read more
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 01:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...sessh is an a$$! man...thats just wrong! poor kags! good story, great development and update soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awosme job, completly awsome! i'm in shock to see that this hasn't earned any more reviews. THIS AWSOME WRITTING!!! they way you mixed the song lyrics (though the father figure is creepy, its done...eek!...) to the action, it was PERFECT! keep up your writting. good job!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no sessho is so cruel. poor kagome. poor yasha. makes me want to slap my Lord Sessho {sessho} what i didnt do it, the writer made me do it sure sure i know how you demon lords are. i was going to say give kag to sessho but with him acting like this no. and poor kag having to grow up like that hopefully kikyou doesnt do anything to rash and maybe yasha will forgive kag and kill sessho for this {sessho} hey....{growls} [yasha] i knew there was something i like about having you as my sister-in-law not one more word from you. we're going to discuss this in private {sessho looks pleadingly at yasha} help me brother [yasha] and have her come after me? no way hehehe keep up the good work and let us know when the next chappie is up :) (everyone laughs at sessho leaving behind claw marks) lol later
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