| "My Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great i really like it please update soon i can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: heartgirl9229 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Is that it??? Its good, but if that's all you're mean to leave it like that *pouts and whines*
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 18:30 CDT
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this is an interesting beginning. please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hmm...well. intresting plot, definatly. i feel bad that Kagome realizes that her dwadling put her out of the danger of the fire (knowing fate saved her yet not her family) and also poor Souta to be on his own. Sessh is...creepy...like Naraku creepy....wow. as for Yash, there's alwasy a heart deep down...just got to find it. i love how Houjo isn't a dim witted geek in this...intresting making him a neko. i would love to hear the reasoning on that. (not a flame, just curious over the significance of the type of youkai he is. is it because of dogs and cats fighting? that would make sense). great story and i hope you decide to rekindle the writting of it. try adding some more description behind the character motivations, like their thought processes or internal striffs, and more dialogue between characters. you have great description decreiving what is going on and why. keep up the good work.
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Title: My Kagome
Reviewed By: mjcrowe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
you need to up date this story becuse it really good so up date it soon
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Title: lalala
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, very original idea! I hope you update soon, and I'll add it to my favorites!
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Title: That was HOT
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was HOT! Soooo GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SoOn!!! PLEASE!!! ^_^ I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: LumChan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 00:18 CDT
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aww poor kagome, everyone is after he =,(
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Title: dude...................
Reviewed By: dj On: September 24, 2004 17:02 CDT
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dude....................this a fr*****' cool story keep the b**** up
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Title: KOOL
Reviewed By: kitty22 On: September 24, 2004 17:00 CDT
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this fic is of to a very good start please update soon i wonder what happens next?hhhhmmmmmmmmm
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Title: vh;b k,gc
Reviewed By: hbk/vh On: September 24, 2004 16:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW !!!!! ITS SUCH A GOOD FIC THAT I WANT TO READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN!!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!!!!pppppppppppplllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeee!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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