Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm quite interesting. A nicely original look (as far as I know) at Eriol & Fujitaka's past. The writing was sometimes a bit heavy, changing the sentence tone & structure every now & then might have helped, but overall I think the style was effective. The strongest point was probably the newness of it, the way you took an interesting interpretation of canon background & added it a bit more. Fujitaka & Eriol giving each other their names was a really cool touch, I thought! This is enjoyable to read & a really funky concept.
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