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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: orginalbuddha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a amazing fic, I am so glad to have read this, I look forward to many more in the future. Your style and creativity is nonpareil.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alas, it's over...i wanna cry! beautiful ending! everyone is happy! and it wasn't cliche! so sweet...*sniffles* it was so touching! will there be a sequel? even just a one-shot? please! *gets on knees* i'm begging you! i love this story so much...i miss it already and i just read it! *calms down some* all goofiness aside, it truly was such a great story. *claps* wonderful job. very well done. overall rating should be...infinity. pretend it says infinity ^_^. i'm so happy i could contribute to it. feel free to use yume in any other story you may write. congratulations on such a wonderful piece. *sniffles again* oh god here it comes again, right when i need to go to sleep! well, it's been a pleasure working with you and even more of a pleasure reading your story. i can't wait to read your future works. happy writing!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 19:03 CST
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fear not, i'm not dead! i have made my return to review!...ok i'm done now ^_^. it's been awhile so i had to take some time to catch up and remember key things (like yume's name...i forgot her name...i forgot my creation's name!) but i remember now so...yeah...ok, time to review. well...how about i sum it up instead of rambling as usual? sound good? good! let's see, to sum this up...i would have to say...AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 10:56 CDT
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gah, i'm sick too. good chappies make icky germs go bye bye ^_^.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 22:28 CDT
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...wow. did NOT see that coming. therefore, i love it ^_^. nice chappy.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
her smile is bright enough to blind? wow...i am good. glad you liked writing her ^_^. my little yume is all grown up...and i loved the "she's always weird" statement. but i think that...she's not weird, she's uniq-...nah, she's weird. lol. but that's why we love her! feel free to use her whenever, even in upcoming stories of yours, even if they are completely unrelated to this. we all need our daily dose of yume, right? regardless of her though i still love this story. especially the romance twists...next update must be soon. *evil face* or i will send my toasters of doom after you!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 22:54 CDT
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gah! she's so perfect i want to cry tears of joy! *flicks a tear* alright, there's one. can't wait for the next scene with yume. i'd really like to see her and hiei go at it because she could piss him off no problem (well, she could do that to anyone) and he's funny when he's mad xD.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yume made her entrance! yay! she's so adorable ^_^. right when i read another elder is coming i was like "oh damn, that's my girl!!". yay for yume! she's great. yay for yume!!!!! glad she's just as childlike, but are we sticking to the brother idea? just wondering. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'd be more than glad to create some angels for you. just tell me what you need. anything for a cute story like this ^_^.
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: lub haruka On: June 27, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don;t know wat to say...it was really FUN!!!! but it would be better if it had a litle bit of comedy...only a little? i think the next part should be something like...the elders did come down to get her because she is needed for something...she runs away agian...kurama gets pissed off at the elders...he turns into youko and goes off by him self to look for her...hiei gets pissed off a little too and goes off by him slef too...koenma tells yusuke to get her before she(your choice)...kuwabara does something stupid that causes a little delay.... it's really your choice i'm just trying to help.BAI!!! (^.^)
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Reviewed By: bitter-sweet dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 14:25 CST
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Well...I guess I have to review here for your new story...oh! by the way, its me Green Breeze, I just got a new screen name...anyway, the storys great! Except chapter 3, it kind of caught me off gaurd, but I just kind of skimed throu it, but the storys sounds goo so far, and You welcome for the encouragement!^^
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 11:14 CDT
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Meow! =3 great chapter!! Update soon!!^^ Oh, and some of your sentensces got cut off...(hehehehehehehe.....i REALLY need to work on my spelling...^^;;)
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Title: hey sorry..
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 11:56 CDT
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hey sorry about how messed up this new chapter is.... my new labtop is giving me a hard time and i need to get a wireless router so i can connect to my regular computer so i can finish all of my fics! ja ne! gomen nasai! smooches!
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Title: last fic to review for
Reviewed By: KitsuneGal_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 13:56 CDT
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ok so i reviewed for all of ur fics, now please get off my back at school! lol, u know i love u...um, that didn't come out right....u know what i mean!! sicko...anyway, continue writing this one cuz its my favorite!! thanks! KitsuneGal_12
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Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 19:30 CDT
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Meow. =3 I got my computer back!!!!!!!! ^^ I'm so happy!!! ^^ Hiei:...Is there even a point to this review? hehehehehehehe...well, ummmm..I cause you're wondering thats why I haven't been updateing...so, UPDATE soon!
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