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| "White Rice and Soy Sauce" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 07:57 CST
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Poor Yusuke. But that smack nearly had me rolling out of my chair. *grins* Maybe he'll be happy? ^ ^;
| Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 14:41 CDT
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Luck is on my side today. By chance I stumbled across one of your works and I was possesed by a sudden urge to read more. I found that everything you write is wonderful. It portrays emotion, character development and it actually has a plot, which is something a lot of writing lacks on this site. You have truely inspired me. I would also like to express my sorrow that you aren't drowning in reviews (not that I wish for your death ha!). It's pitiful how such writing can be ignored in favor of the mindless ramblings of obsessive fan-girls. Now if you'll excuse me I have to go purge myself of the aweful memories of what some idiots call stories.
| Reviewed By: penguins4sale(not logged in) On: October 02, 2004 08:08 CDT
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This was really good, and I loved how you compared them to soy sauce and rice. It put a well painted picture in my mind about how close they were to each other, and how much Keiko truly loved Yusuke.
| Reviewed By: Tikia Thundaren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! I'm late reviewing this, aren't I? I would like to say now that that was beautiful. I really enjoy reading your work, specifically the parts that try to delve the most into a characters personality or phsyce. Those are the ones that really make you stop and think. I also like that you've looked beyond the ending of the series. So many people forget that the humans of the series (a.k.a. Keiko, Kuwabara, Shiori, etc) will eventually die. You did an excellent hob of portraying that. I really liked the line, 'But that was then, this is now, and soy sauce, by itself, is not even a meal.' That one really reaches out to the poetic part in me. And you threw a little K/H in there, too, which makes it even better ^-~ Well, I'm glad you posted, and I hope to see more from you soon! Tikia Thundaren.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I really liked the metaphors of rice, soy sauce, soup and vegetables.
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