| "Acquainted With the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: huh?
Reviewed By: NoOneofConsequence On: June 19, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good fanfic, I definitely enjoyed reading it. Also, it wasn't one of those classic S/J or R/B so I liked that. I don't quite understand one thing. Did Mariku kill Atemu/Nahkti? Care to explain?
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 10:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow this was increadible ^_^ I can't wait for the sequel. I had to re-erad this cuz I got lost at the end (I though Marik was gonna kill yugi so I though wtf?!?!?) but yeah my fault not your's I hope I can see more fics from you
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: VampLuvah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 17:33 CST
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Yo. I just wanted to say that I really really enjoyed your yaoi fic. that was the first Marik/Yami I've ever actually enjoyed. oh, and you might want to work on the foreplay a little. I think Yami might be the foreplay type. also, Yami's Egyptian name, acutally he had three. His first Egyptian name was Atemu. The second was Bell-Ouhm-Fahl (Don't ask how I found this out.) The third is his war name, and the one we all know him by. Yami. Yay for the Darkness! Anyway, nice job and sorry for the slight rant.
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Reviewed By: Hotaru-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gack! Is Marik going to kill Yami...AGAIN!? That is just nuts!!!!!! But...I really liked this story. You should write a sequel, because you left it at a fuckin' cliffhanger! Meanie-butt poop-head! (Sorry, I've been hanging out iwth one of my friends for one -too-many silly sessions. Great work!
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Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 00:23 CST
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Well, Pana-chan, you really outdid yourself in this - I'm jealous. This is the only decent Yami/Marik fic I've actually read on this site since there's a surplus amount of Yami/Yugi. Very good.
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Title: unhappy person
Reviewed By: Kaido Seiyousa On: November 17, 2004 14:37 CST
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i believe you reviewed my story CutScenes, and i have a few things to say to you. i'm not using my age to attract pity readers, and so what if i can't spell. as for your other comments, who d'you think you are... my mother? i don't care if it makes me sound pathetic, i AM fucking pathetic. pretty much everyone i kno in my life agrees with that, so why not those i kno on the net, too? and it's y'all's problems that you don't think i should be writting yaoi/hentai at 14, alright? so, the only rude comment i've said to you so far: go shove it up your fucking ass and email me when your done! i'm serious, drop me an email if you want me to bitch some more: kaido_seiyousa@yahoo.com and commenting on your story, it's okay.
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Title: wheee!
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
great story! it's really 'waii and stuff. plz update. thanx bye
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Reviewed By: rose of vegeta On: October 11, 2004 09:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was good. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it (puts my own fanfic to shame...aw well my fanfic is really my first anyway). Great job. And I'm not really a Yugioh fan (though I do know a little about it so I wasn't too lost). The ending was great. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Wee woo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright you momo, Deme means Anna, as in Roseanna. All in all, this was good. I'm not going to lie when I say I actually enjoyed this. You're opening new doors for me, thanks. However, I'm still in my SetoxJou phase, so these 'doors' have to wait. I was wondering if I'd have to go crazy on the spelling and grammer, obviously I don't. There aren't many mistakes, one or two minor ones and thats's it. Nice. HOWEVER, you did rush the lemon a little bit. Rushing automatically reserves a place in Purgatory for you! I know Marik likes his sex 'hard and fast' but you still should prolong the climax a bit more. That's just me though, I like foreplay. Also.. what the hell was up with Yami's ancient name?! What happened to Atemu? Mariku is cool, as they use that I Japan, I think. You also used the word 'chaste' and 'chastely' too often for my tastes. *Throws a thesaurus at you* BUT! I must give a HUGE heads up for using my favorite word so damn much. Guess it and win a shiny new nickel! (Not! My money!) T'was a good one shot, and I now realize what a good authoress you are. If you wrote a R/B, M/M, or S/J... I'd be all over it. Oh and as a parting note, this might just be me, but I don't like it when authors put an 'A/N' in the storyline. To me, it ruins the train of though. Just an opinion. Well, I think that's it. I have more of your crap to read.. sayonara.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was confusing. So Marik did in his own lover?
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! The suspence!!! I hope you write more!! I can't wait to see an update!!
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Title: It's Awesome!
Reviewed By: casmuter On: September 25, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is da bomb! I just love it! You should definitely write more stories about it. I look forward to reading more! (Great Job!)
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