| "The Death Dealer" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Title: pairing for story
Reviewed By: ryousira On: July 14, 2008 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story has me hooked, waiting for next chapter to come up. I vote for the Sesshomaru/Kagome/Kurama pairing.
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Title: Chapter
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't know what happen to chapters 5 and 6, but the redo is great. Update soon. Think Sesshomaru/Kagome/Hiei/Kurama would be great, but if can not do make it Hiei/Kagome/Kurama and leave Sesshomaru as her brother. Pair Sesshomaru with Kuawabaras' Sister or Botan.
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 20:40 CDT
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i vote for Sesshomaru/Kagome/hiei/kurama i know it wuld be hard for you and i believe you could do it but in an event that you decide that you cant do it i vote for Sesshomaru/Kagome/hiei
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:01 CDT
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I vote for Kurama/Kagome/Hiei or just Kagome/Kurama.I'm a major Kagome.Sesshomaru supporter but with the way that you've written this, I think that it would be better just to keep Sesshomaru as the "other brother"... I know that you havent updated this in a long time but I was hopeing that maybe I could give you that little push so that you could reconciter leaving it alone and coninute with the fic. I don't have much else to say except that this could be a wonderful fic if you just continue it and make sure that you know the pairings before you write too much. I wanna see Souta's face when he finds out about Kagome and what the Spirit World might want with her. I sadly have to go now though, With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty On: November 02, 2006 10:08 CST
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Please make this a Hiei/kagome/Kurama story I love that pairing.
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Title: The Death Dealer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, & Hiei please?
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Reviewed By: sisterinlaw358 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 12:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
nooooo you cant do this to me they didnt even meet yet
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please! I vote for Kagome and Hiei.
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Reviewed By: me On: May 16, 2006 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i really like this story it is really awsome. :) but just an idea, in future chapters maybe you could use spell check? it helps me a lot as well when i'm typing too :)well i look forward to an update an i vote for kura/kag/hiei
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Reviewed By: J On: May 14, 2006 20:02 CDT
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Kagome/Hiei *sigh, I'm such a hypocrite *your*
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Reviewed By: J On: May 14, 2006 20:01 CDT
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The basic idea of oyur story is pretty good, but you have a ton of spelling and grammar mistakes.
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru/Kagome/Hiei
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Reviewed By: River of Blood On: May 13, 2006 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to tell you how much I have enjoyed your story so far. I hope you update again soon. I also vote Sesshoumaru/Kagome/Kurama.
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Reviewed By: nck On: May 13, 2006 17:36 CDT
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kag hiei
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Reviewed By: Dragonsflame On: May 13, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story can't wait for the next chapter. I vote for Hiei/Kagome
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