| "Omoide" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 11:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
heres a new story, your second pure IY fict, and lookn good at the moment, keep it goen
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: September 25, 2004 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is a great start to a story, but I do have some grammatical complaints. The excessive "!!!!"s and "?!?!?!?!"s get really annoying after a while. Other than that, the plot is getting off to a great start!
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