| "Intimacy" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: Deathwatch Beetle On: May 26, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an interesting concept, though I've seen something of it's nature done at least twice. Still, you put a new twist on it by making it a non sexual act. That was very estute and I commend your maturity. I truly felt like I was witnessing not a smutty, passionate moment, but something tasteful, private, and sad all at the same time. It takes a very talented writer to bring those feelings out in a reader who started out hoping for just some...well, H/K action, if you'll excuse my blunt admission. Please, Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: sueb262 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 02:05 CDT
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I've read this story several times now, and it never gets old. You have powerfully captured the nature of true intimacy. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
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Reviewed By: Hieis Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww So cute :')
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH that is just so sweet and adorable, you did extremely well on the details in that. I really liked that and it is just so cute. You really are a very good writer. I really enjoy your stories. I'm favouriting you as an author, I think you're that good.
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW THAT WAS SO SWEET! IT WAS SO CUTE!!! I'm almost crying at the kawaiiness! Its so awesome! All I have to say is: make different paragraphs when someone new speaks. It makes it easier on the eyes @.@
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 13:08 CST
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That was really pretty. Very cute and it had much meaning to it. A very touching story. Love the way you write.
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Reviewed By: HieiAndKuramaLover#? On: November 07, 2004 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o Wow...that was amazing...totally awesome...way to go!!! Really, that was an excellent fic -- very origial/clever idea, and so well done. The characters seemed very real and deep, and you managed to retain all of Hiei's "hiei-ness" throughout the "ordeal"(for lack of a better word!). ^__~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 01:39 CDT
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I really, really loved the concept of this story! It was beautiful and moving... But you need a new paragraph for each time that someone speaks. A BETA reader should be able to help you with that.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so amazing. Lovely is the word that comes to mind. It brought tears to my eyes. Loved it.
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 14:39 CDT
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is there more? i liked this. please write more. i love hiei/kurama fics, and this one explains what the others can't. this shows the emotional side of love and not the lust the two have. i love this, please write more
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