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"Tornament 1" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ]
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 Reviewed By: Kai_Kite_Sisters [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2004 08:30 CDT
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 Title: Amy Rose
Reviewed By: samus_17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2004 00:29 CDT
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Also Amy has a Millenium Item called the Millenium Braclet...if you want to know how it works go to my sister's story called " A Girl Named Amy..." Thanks! ^^ Whoa! About Rei's info...never been written in my sister's stories!! It's like a total sneek peak of her past!! HOLY CRAP!! And if you read the story then you might just get a better idea of what Amy is like.^^ And see how much she hates Tristan. Bwahahaha!! I hate him so.
 Reviewed By: samus_17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2004 00:13 CDT
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Name: Amy Rose Age: 16 Height: 5'8" Outfits(2-3)(include casual, bathing and pajamas) : White tang-top with black belt straps. White mini skirt and white high-heel shoes. Long black finger gloves with 2 belts on each arm. And dark purple strap that goes around her neck, upper left arm and left thigh. Red bikini. Red tang top and sweat pants(PJ's) Bishi(paired with): Ryou Bakura/ Yami no Bakura [ Just say Ryou for the Hikari and Bakura for the Yami] Weapon(s): A red spear(Like Tao Ren's spear from Shaman King) Personality: Looks innocent but is actually really bitchy...hates Tristan very very much. Violent and has a bit of an attitude. But feels pretty shy when Bakura/Ryou is giving her ALOT of attention. Normally she's really nice and brave...stubborn but still...she's a little rich girl too. Background info: I don't know...(I know it's my character but I'm just too lazy to think..( -.- ) ZzZ) Physical Appearance(like hair, eyes, etc): short red hair(similar to Sakura's hair from cardcaptors) light skin color. red eyes. Favorite Food: Spring Rolls Favorite time in the day: Sunset or noon Favorite song and artist(if girl)(telling you now, your going to sing): Hilary Duff: Come Clean
 Title: Rei Aiyanamei [ II ]
Reviewed By: azn_sakura17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 23:53 CDT
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---------- Part 2 ---------- Background info: She came from Anicent Eygpt. And came to the present time to continue her duty...to serve the Pharaoh...Her village was attacked and she was the ONLY servivor...the pharaoh took Rei in because of her myterious powers and was to be raised to fight for and to serve Pharaoh. She was to be a slave for life. But a great war was unleased and she was forced to go through time...5000 years into the future(or is it 3000?). As she grew up she was put through harsh training and much misery, she hated her life and the Pharaoh but when she met Yami/Yugi(present time) He...was different. Kind. She loves her new friends and would do anything to protect them. Rei looks forward to the future...her future... Physical Appearance:Long black hair that goes down to the waist with big bangs the go down to her chin(maybe longer)[similar to Serenity's hair style]. Raspberry color eyes. Light colored skin(she's from eygpt but when coming to the future, time travel affected her skin color). Favorite Food: Ice Cream(Anything sweet) Favorite time in the day: Not sure but loves the night... Favorite song and artist(if girl)(telling you now, your going to sing): Ayumi Hamasaki - Evolution (wait! that's a japanese song but just in case I'll put my favorite ENGLISH song) ...I can't think of one!! But I'll put...an InuYasha song (everyone has watched it..most of them anyway) InuYasha - Come(This is the end theme song like in ep. 147 something?
 Title: Rei Aiyanamei [ I ]
Reviewed By: azn_sakura17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 23:28 CDT
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--------------------- Part 1 --------------------- Name: Rei Aiyanamei Age: 16 Height: 5'7 Outfits(2-3)(include casual, bathing and pajamas) : White tub top with a black tag-top like vest. A belt that goes under...breasts(to keep the vest together..it's the way it's suppose to be). A black mini school skirt with a white stripe that goes along the bottem. Thigh-high black socks with black high-heel shoes. A really light blue colored arm sleeves(like Mai's) and black finger gloves. Sliver necklace, 2 gold braclets on each hands...and a red head-band. Black bikini. And a big over sized white T-shirt and black shorts(wow alot of black but if I could I'd show you a pic. I drew) Bishie(paired with): Marik/Malik [I perfere Marik as the Hikari and Malik as the Yami] Weapon(s): Samurai sword or a katana Personality: Kinda distant. She doesn't like to show to much emotion, example love, because she's afraid that it could make her weak...but loves to play and sometimes can be immature but when it comes to dueling she's a serious and powerful duelist. She's pretty quiet at most times.And totally loves to sing. She loves the dark and doesn't like to be alone...she doesn't like to speak about her past. It was...too horrifiying...She doesn't like it when someone makes her feel weak...and not only that she is a SORCERESS!!
 Reviewed By: Kai_Kite_Sisters [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 20:49 CDT
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 Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 19:40 CDT
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NAME: Nanashi AGE: 16 HEIGHT: 5 foot 2 OUTFITS: (casual) = jeans, oversized green sweater, and black flat-soled shoes. (bathing suit) = black halter top w/black bottoms that you can't see b/c i also wear beige board shorts w/a black stripe down each side (but I don't know how to swim) (pjs) = black sweatpants and a tight with t-shirt BISHI: Hiei WEAPON: katana PET(S): none PERSONALITY: stubbon, tomboy-ish, clumsy, sweet, intelligent, sarcastic, blunt, afraid of water. BACKROUND INFO: Biological father became a drug addict and my mom left him when I was 2, and I haven't heard from him since. Mom remarried some stupid guy and then ignored me for the next 10 years. She had another daughter with my step-dad, named Sachiko, around the time I turned 9. She's cute and I love her to death. When I turned 12 I couldn't take it any more and I moved to the Ningenkai, got a job waitressing, and I've lived alone in my apartment ever since. APPEARANCE: Black, straight hair cut really short (almost like a guy's). Green eyes. Scar on left forearm from cooking...don't ask -_-U FAV. FOOD: rice...mmmmmmmm... FAV TIME O'DAY: sunrise FAV. SONG & ARTIST: Sarah McLachlan, Time DEMON INFO: My hair turn white, my eyes get black and pupil-less, and my fangs are a bit more pronounced. Other than that i'm the same. Also, I'm a wind demon, and I keep all my powers in my more human looking form. My youki (demon energy) is red.
 Reviewed By: DCosmos [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 19:38 CDT
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Back ground: never knew her mother or father. she has lived her life all alone. fav food: ramen fav time of day: the morning and ending of the day Fav song: move your body by Nina Sky, lose my breathe by Destinys Child, and pieces of me by Ashlee Simpson
 Reviewed By: DCosmos [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 19:32 CDT
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Name: Kira Yuki Age: 18 Height: 5' 11" outfits: casual: black mini skirt, silver tank top, light bliue flip-flops, silver poncho,and fingerless gloves that go to mid arm, bathing: pink two piece, pj: pink and black Bishie: Kiba Weapons: a bow and arrow that can you ki and a g-shape glave Pets: a small wolf that has two talls(looks like kirara from Inuyasha) Personality: Quiet and cold to people who she first meets.Doesn't have any friends. Is a loner. Physical Apperance: long dark brown hair with lighter strips of brown and dark brown eyes has the tatto of a silver wolf on her back
 Reviewed By: Kai_Kite_Sisters [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 18:52 CDT
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Thanks(blushes)...for wanting to be in our story...
 Title: Masako Undine (III)
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 18:42 CDT
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BACKGROUND (cont) Due to the fact she's only child, Masako found herself alone most of the time and the girl couldn't help but fall in depression (she was 15), which passed unnoticed by her mother. At the age of 16, Masako even thought about suicide, because she couldn't handle the fact her parents had got divorced and seemed not to care for her anymore, but everytime she was about to grab a knife and end her life, Masako managed to remember Life is a gift and with the help from her friends (who knew she was depressed, but not why), Masako managed to get out of the depression. However, when she reached the age of 18, Masako decided to buy a house, where she could be alone. And, after a short talk with her mother, Masako ended up buying a small apartment close to college. APPEARENCE: Shoulder length, dark ocean-blue hair and brown eyes. Masako has a sturdy yet slender figure. She also has creamy skin. FAV.FOOD: Yakisoba (The combination of fried noodles, meat, vegetables and sweet, brown tonkatsu sauce) FAV. TIME IN DAY: Midnight FAV.SONG & SINGER: 'Missing' by Evanescence. Artist: Amy Lee --- In case you need any other information, please e-mail me (may find my e-mail in my profile). Good luck with your fic.
 Title: Masako Undine (II) - it was cut, sorry -
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 18:39 CDT
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BISHIE: Heero Yuy WEAPON: A long sword and a gun. PET: A snow owl called Shiro. PERSONALITY: Masako is a happy person, who enjoys making people laugh. She also likes to give a second chance to all those who she believes that deserve it. Despite the fact you can always see a smile on Masako's face, the truth is that the smile is like a shield that protects the girl from talking about her problems to the others. Masako hates to bother others with her problems, but she's always around when someone needs a shoulder. Nevertheless, the girl likes to have her own time and you can usually see her alone, thinking about her life and friends. Oh, and Masako can be a klutz when she's really nervous (specially when it comes to the guy she likes). BACKGROUND: Masako's parents divorced when she was 12 and, while Masako's father went to Ingland (he works in a hotel), the Masako stayed in Japan with her mother. Since then, Masako only saw her father 2/3 per year, while her mother worked all days (and nights) at Tokio's hospital, since she is a surgeon. (need to continue in another review, gomen)
 Title: I would like to give this a try: Masako Undine (I)
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2004 18:35 CDT
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Name: Masako Undine Age: 18 Height: One inch smaller than her crush Outfits: casual a pair of faded dark grey jeans and a black chinese shirt, which has a silver zip that goes from the neckband to the right shoulder. Masako wears a pair of black boots with that outfit. bathing a blood-red and black bikini, both colours mixed. Masako usually wears a small black skirt and black sandals, with blood red flowers. pj's a pair of blood red shorts and a blood red t-shirt, which has a huge black eye on the front.
 Title: it got cut off
Reviewed By: Kimba  On: September 25, 2004 17:22 CDT
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Physical Appearance(like hair, eyes, etc)the front part is yellow and rest is black, brown eyes, A scar over her left eye, and 4 earrings on her left ear. Favorite Food: ROCK CANDY! Favorite time in the day: Night Favorite song and artist(if girl)(telling you now, your going to sing): Jump off by Lil Kim, Move your Body Like snake By R kelly and Pill by Pink. Backround: ... Juriko is also wanted for killing demons in her past life.. that way she is still in her Kitten form.. it very hard to find demon in Beast forms (Ohkays all.. if you don't get Juiko's past and and suff just email me at Snowfoxneo14@aol.com
 Reviewed By: Kimba  On: September 25, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Name:Juiko ' Eikchi' Kuwabara ( You will see why her name is that) Age: 17 Height:5'8 Outfits(2-3)(include casual, bathing and pajamas) : 1)A pair of Baggy black jeens with a tank top, black fingerless gloves. 2) a white dress blouse, with a jean top over it. pants and boots. Bathing suit: A black whole on with a Thunder blot goingthought it. PJ's: Blue tank top and light blue pants. Bishi(paired with): Yusuke, Koemna or Keshin. Weapon(s): Bow and Arrow with Lighting arrows, A light botl shape Sword that is allway on her back. Pet(s)(something small that will sit on your shoulder, head, etc): The baby from off Veemon off Digimon second seson, only black and Yellow Personality: Juiko is like a Female Kuwbarara.. all Heart.. not that clear. but looking at her you could tell that see loves to have fun. A real smart ass, don't know when to shut up, her Mouth gets her in mess. but all and all A good fighter and pertty cool Friend. Demon side: has a Long hair that's Golden yellow, with black at the lips, Black ears and Tail, the tail is shaped like a Thunder bolt. Demon info: Juiko is a Black thunder cat, a Rare Breed. One day she got Hurt very very Badly but the same Hunter that got yoko. Juiko went to the Human world and Hid in the body of a Kitten.. and that same Kitten was taken in by non other Then Kuwarara..The only Person how know's she is there is Kuwarabra's Sister. Physical Appearance(like hair, eyes, etc):the front part is yellow and rest is black, brown eyes, A scar ove
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