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| "The Swordsman's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Chissa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
there were some mistakes you could easily make, but consider to reread it, or let somebody else do it (not me). At one point, you change the girls name into Kri (???) which has a damaging effect. Try to make more of the story, by adding more descriptions; now it's just a lemon fic. But hey, I love your idea. Keep it up =)
| Title: DO ME A FAVOR! ^u^
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
CAN YOU DO ME A FAVOR? Change the first a in Kara to i, Kira. SO that way it's me and Zoro-chan getting down with our bad selves. Anyway I like your fic, Zoro is so fucking cute. He's gonna get raped one day, lol, JA NE! ^u^
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