| "Fantasies are not just fantasies" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: LadyYamii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, but it moves on a little bit too fast. :)
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Reviewed By: Meako Tsuki On: July 10, 2005 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great fic! I love your fic! Continue the good work and update soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: s300 On: February 20, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is super cool this is great keep up the expectacular job.love it
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: xLoSeRiFiCx69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i noe u havent updated in a while..but you really shud! i love ur fic! its sooo awesome!!
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Title: My review for chapter four
Reviewed By: kulapesh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 11:34 CST
Comment/Review:
cool! i loved it!!!
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Title: My review for chapter three!!!!
Reviewed By: kulapesh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chappie even if it's shorter than the others though... ^-^V I liked it as a HaoxOC though but Horohoro's fine! rok on!
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Title: My review for chapter two!!!
Reviewed By: kulapesh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chappie dude! try visiting e-fiction.org! I'm there and i make CYOA's!!! if ur interested, you can look for me there! my name there is still kulapesh! I wanna be friends with ya! here's my e-mail! kio_sekozawa@yahoo.com! i hope to see ur messge!
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Title: My review for chapter one
Reviewed By: kulapesh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good!!!I LOVE HAO!!!
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Reviewed By: SakuraElric98 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Update soon! I really like this story!
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Reviewed By: Crystalstar On: November 03, 2004 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I really like this stroy
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Title: The present
Reviewed By: Crystalstar On: November 03, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this please update soon.
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