| "Young Immortal" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: July 21, 2005 20:21 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 13:37 CDT
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*bawling* AWWWW!!!! That was the most beautiful..*sniffle* ending, without making the story seem like a chick-flick!!! I was listening to Evanescence's Hello while reading the last 3 chappies, and i was crying so much my mom thought i had PMS ( which i did have ^_^*) and was watching 'Titanic' Anyway, this is THE BEST story i've EVER read and you are forever on my FAVES list!! I WILL read the sequel!!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Moon_water [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 21:26 CDT
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I love it. Thats one of the best storys I've read in the longest time. I hope you'll write a sequal for it. I'm definitly adding your stroy to my favorites. Keep up the exellent work
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander *forgot to sign in ^_^;* On: October 23, 2004 21:23 CDT
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uh.... YES! sry, but WHAT KIND OF DUMB QUESTION IS THAT?! of course you should do a sequal! ^_^ lol, sry if that sounded kind of harsh. Im a very outspoken person!^_^; During this fic, you didnt really do a lot of waffyness between Hiei and Shiroi. i mean there were moments, but it wasnt really clear whether or not Shiroi returned his feelings for her. so anyway, i hope you make that more clear in the sequal. ILL BE LOOKING FOR IT!!! ^_^ ja ne ~aliya ps- maybe, you can make them mates? that would be cool!
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo good! I almost cried reading the letters she wrote! Please put up the sequal asap!!
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 16:57 CDT
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WHAT THE CRAP?!?!?! ONLY FIVE FRIKIN REVIEWS INCLUDING MINE?! that is completely unacceptable for such an awesome fic! this is the first fic i've read where i didnt dislike and get annoyed with the main character cause she was shy and/or timid. Shiroi can pull that off without being too clingy or annoying. plus, i think the way you proportioned the time in which she grew used to the boys was nothing short of perfect. some authors would make her warm up to them immediately which is just ridiculous considering the trauma they put the character in. others spend the WHOLE fic getting the person used to the gang and then kills them off right afterward(or at least makes things so bad they have to start the whole process over again!) well, that was a really long review! *wipes sweat off brow* i absolutely loved it and i hope you update soon and frequently! you are officially on my FAVORITES LIST now! ^_^ keep up the... uhm... awesome-ness? lol~~aliya
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Reviewed By: HtT (not logged in) On: October 23, 2004 15:32 CDT
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Awesome!! Sounds like this could REALLY happen in the actual tv series!! Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 22:03 CDT
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;_; *wipes tears from eyes* That was...BEAUTIFUL!!!!! A wonderfully subtle, yet...uhh... known (i guess -_-) romance with Hiei! She recovers, right? RIGHT?!! *sobs this* I DON'T WANT SHIROI TO DIE ON ME!!!!!!! I LOVED the story aNYWAYS, (dammit i hit the CAPS button again) Maybe write sequels? PLZ WRITE MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: AmberL. On: October 20, 2004 01:26 CDT
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I got on here for you...Don't you feel special... Now I'll have to come and annoy you every day...HAHA! You know I like the story! You're getting pretty good, but not as good as me...joke! I know...*Smack* Oh well, write more...I'm gonna go and read your other works...but they probably suck too...*Smack* Thanks for killing me! But at school tomorrow you'll have to fill me in on a few things. ok? o_0
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Reviewed By: Hanami_The_Tsunami (or Hitori) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 21:41 CDT
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O_O AMAZING!!!!! WRITE MORE!!! THis Shiroi is cool!! you kept me reading all of the chapters(thats hard 2 do you kno.-_-*) WRITE MORE! YOU ARE AWESOME!!! If ya dont write more...I'll...I'll...uhhh I'll CRY! (puppy dog eyes)Plz write more!!
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