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| "For the love of you." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Maxsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 20:39 CST
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oh my gosh I totally love your story I can really see myself in it! I can't till the next chapter! I think Raven needs to suffer though!*plots to get rid of Raven*
| Title: meep
Reviewed By: Kiwi me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT! lol. great job, and the story is fantastic ^+^ i love it so much. you have great writting talent. it was sooooo cute, i could just see myself in it. Good job, and please update soon, id love to read more. -kiwi
| Title: meep
Reviewed By: Kiwi me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 19:53 CST
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| Reviewed By: RoninSoldier [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, you are truly a great writer! I've always wanted to write a story with abuse but I could never get it detailed perfectly like you...Please continue! I absolutely LOVE this story...in fact I'm going to read your other story. You also have a great style and great spelling. (You wouldn't believe how many people can't spell 'the' right~ :D) Anyways great work and please, please, please continue! ~RoninSoldier~
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 01:19 CDT
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I guess alot of people don't read originals... oh well, With stories like yours, they are missing out. Hmmm... The plot is intense, and everything fits in well, everyone is... I'd say in character but that wouldn't imply... reacting to the plot, in the way they would seem to. That's all I can dig up for compliments, critism at the moment. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O this is intense, very descriptive and... actual. It's almost hard to imagine the hell the kids with abusive parents have to live through... no, it's nigh impossible for me, I have no real concept of it. What's going to happen between Raven and Crag? or is it Craig? Serious and intense... she's a tragic character.
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