| "Flight Fears and Tour Troubles" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write more please oh please oh please!
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Reviewed By: XxxInukuraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww! i loved that chapter! It was so cute! And the boxers ^_^ hehe. You have Yuki really in character, I think. Most people just have him come right out and say 'OH SHUICHI I LOVE YOU SO!' and that's WAY out of character for yuki, but I think you really have him in character. Well, bye bye! UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Phoenix51 On: August 11, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Story!! Please Continue!!
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Reviewed By: XxxInukuraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOOOOOOOOOOD CHAPPY! you really do have yuki in character, and i love the plotline of this story haha anyways, update!
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Title: hahah
Reviewed By: nya! On: June 03, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahah i loved your story it was thery entertaining and i loved the way you showed a very different side of Yuki that you don't get to see......well anyway's WRITE MORE MORE MORE.......hahahahaha keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Kyoufu On: May 22, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved all your chapters and I want another chapter! So please write another!
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Reviewed By: darkwanderer666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 13:11 CDT
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This was an interesting fic. I rarely say that, so it really is a compliment... I'm just kidding, so are you going to write another chapter? I hope so. Well anyway, thanks for writing this, it provided some good entertainment.
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! This is a great story.
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Title: not bad
Reviewed By: Lady_Lucifer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad. i like the emotion that you have Eirie exposing. very nice.
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Reviewed By: Nut Kitteh On: March 30, 2005 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You like the ratings? Anyways...you're very good at this. It's funny...bcoz I know how Shu feels...I've never been on a plane before 0.0;; Well...lets see...*blushes* Um well...I like reading ones where they are rough. Maybe they can have an arguement when Shuichi returns. THEN THEY CAN HAVE ROUGH, HOT SEX! BWAHAHAHA...ha? *blinks* Sorry...heh n.n; And most likey, they will end up apologizing or something. You do what you want kay? I loved it! Go at your own pace. ~Kyo~
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Reviewed By: Anacondaur On: March 04, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this. Its kinda short, but not bad at all. I think you have skills to write, and thats why I'm writing a review. You should continue. (:
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Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed (Too Lazy to log in) On: November 13, 2004 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
What do I want you to do in the fic? More sex. ...What?
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Reviewed By: Shizuo On: October 10, 2004 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
you have to continue it! i'm really depressed that you only stopped there! Hurry and write some more!
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Title: ^.^!!
Reviewed By: Katherine On: October 10, 2004 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update please ::does puppy dog face:: ^.^
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Title: Continue please!!!!
Reviewed By: Kate09190 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes please continue this!! They make the cutestest couple. I really loved your story it has a cute background to it, Shuichi's afraid to fly etc... ^.^ it's the best story out off all the ones I've read about them so far. Keep going please love it!!
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Title: Please Continue!!!
Reviewed By: darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! It is an awesome story!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
How dare you stop there?! I loved this fic it was the bomb. I hope u do more. Maybe a longer lemon and more detailing if u can...but that's just my taste and just me. I'm not the writer u r. But other then that I loved ur story and hope u write more. Please!!!!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a really cute story. Please continue!
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