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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:20 CDT
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*cough* my last review should have spelled meat..MEET. I am literate, dont ya know! wot wot! LoL ok enough silliness...I want to commend you on another excellent chapter...I really like this current situation with the girls...and guys. Thanks Koenma! LoL or thanks to you! Hey, I gotta love being tackled by Kurama dont I? But its not just me! I love how youve played out all the characters...its so promising as of yet and I look forward to more chapters of this! Your strategy for the next three chapters sounds good and I hope it works out well for you! Also, sounds good how Hiei was talking and discovering info about Shae and the girls...nice. And Yuusuke's line about Koenma having to do all the dirty work if he didnt have them was awesome. Score one. LoL. Ooo yes, and I LOOOOVE the 'benefits.' Heehee! One last note...*dreamy eyes* Youko! I can't wait! Hope you don't have too much difficulty with producing more excellent chapters! Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Alinna On: October 18, 2004 17:16 CDT
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AWESOME chapter ^__^ my favorite one so far , I got to give Kuwabara a concussion(Sp?)update soon plz
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Reviewed By: AttentionWallMartShoppers(Aka Raised in an asylum) On: October 14, 2004 19:58 CDT
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AWESOME! This fic rocks , it keeps getting better and better . XD you're a great aurthor , andI'm not just saying that . ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: October 14, 2004 19:51 CDT
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WOW!!!!Thax you for updating!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. PLZ update soon
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:21 CDT
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Well of COURSE we (the rest of the girls) should get there in time! I mean...we want to meat up with them babes dont we? jk...kinda...not really! Either way, I cant wait to see whats happening next. Wouldnt it seem very funny to wake up with a toddler in your face...hm...yep. Shae's quotes have to be important to the story later on...in explanation or something...I just don't know yet how! and as for Yune's plan, brilliant. Cause a huge disturbance...no other way to find them. Well, drastic times call for drastic measures! Excellent chapter! Until next time, ja ne! *Cymarel
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Reviewed By: Raised in an asylum (Bieng lazy) On: October 02, 2004 11:28 CDT
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Good chapter ^_^
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Title: YOU ROCK!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: October 01, 2004 16:09 CDT
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YAY!!! Thanx you for putting my OC in!!!^_^ YOU ROCK!!!PLZ UpDATE SOON!!! P.S.NO I'm Not mad that you, and you may chose if you want to have Lemon for OC
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 15:04 CDT
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Nice chapters so far! I like how you introduced all the characters and give them all plenty of action! And way to introduce the guys! Woot! I'm really enjoying this already! I am soooo curious about how they were situated there and prepared...hope to see how that all works out! ja ne! till next chapter, Cymarel
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Title: Thanks for putting me in the fic!
Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 18:03 CDT
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oo cool...yea I'll take Jin or Suzaku...
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Alinna On: September 28, 2004 11:24 CDT
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Thanks for putting me in the story , this is a very original idea . I don't mind bieng air , that's cool . Ja Ne
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Title: Just decided to give it a try
Reviewed By: Oceano_Azul (I don't know why I didn't logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:05 CDT
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I know you said you only needed 3 Oc's and you already have 4 reviews, but I decided to give it a try: NAME: Riana Pelagia AGE: 18 APPEARENCE: One inch shorter than her crush; shoulder lenght reddish-orange hair with two orange streaks at the front and purple eyes. Riana has a stury yet slender figure. She usually uses a pair of faded black jeans and a black chinese shirt, which has a red zip that goes from the neckband to the right shoulder and it also has a imagine of a blood-red panther at the front. She wears a black earing with a ruby in her left outer-ear. HABILITIES: Can use water to creath a shield around her and her friends and she's also psykic. PAIRING: Yusuke or Kurama LEMON:No --- if you need anything else, just e-mail me (all you need to do is check m bio). Good luck with your fic! ---
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Title: Sounds like a kick ass story to me...
Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 17:43 CDT
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NAME: Sachiko AGE: 16 PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: 5'2'' , short black hair, green eyes, scar on left forearm from cooking...don't ask -_-U , wears loose, black capri pants and a green tank top with black shoes. ABILITIES: Controls the element Air, can fly, etc. PAIRING: Touya LEMON: You have my permission to do one, but I wont make you or anything ^_^ If you need anything else (like personality?) then just e-mail me!
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Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: September 27, 2004 17:43 CDT
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Name:Yune Snown Age:14 Physical Description: Deep-blue eyes, long,black hair that in low pony tail, she wear a black jean pants and a white tank top and wear black chiness slipers (Like Kurama wears in his battle). Her height is 5'6 Abiltities: Controls ice use swift motions with her hand or her ice saff for more powerful attacks Pairing:Hiei or Touya
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Title: Can I be in?
Reviewed By: Raised in an asylum (Bieng lazy) On: September 27, 2004 15:43 CDT
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Can I be in? here's the info NAME:Alinna (Ali)AGE:19 PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:waist length silver hair with blue and orange streaks , 5'9 her eyes are orange w/ silver rims and she wears a black shirt that says "Invade Canada" bellow it has a maple leaf.She has a tatoo of a vine with a rose around her waist. ABILITIES:She can control the element ice PAIRING:Hige or Yusuke LEMON:Yes
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Title: OC = me!
Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 15:20 CDT
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oh I would sooo not mind being in a fic...especially if I have a chance...for Kurama neh? so heres my first picks: and some seconds: Name: Cymarel Age: 17 (just turned) Physical description: brown hair with natural highlights down to waist length, light blue/grey eyes, swimmers build (I can detail that more if you need me to), height 5'6", wears white halter (two or three inch wide with collar) top that wraps around to tie on left side with blue sash and has blue trim on fold down collar. Skirt is white with blue trim at the bottom and slightly shorter than fingertip length when hands held straight at sides. (so Im guessing there is a school uniform...so she wears this out of schoo I guess!) Also wears hair either back with a headband or tied in a high ponytail and then braided. Earrings are silver and worn on both ears - some elegant design...Im not fully decided on that...so if you wish to design it that would be wonderful! If not Ill create them in a drawing and send that to you if possible Abilities: Controls water: uses swift motions of her hands to direct it: similar in appearance to liquid raving if you know what that is, if not, er...oh well! second choice would be air (earth of course would be last) Pairing: Kurama babe (can I have him please? oh yes) Lemon: *nods* oh yeah any clarification questions just ask me! hope this is ok! not enough in any category? missing anything?
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