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Reviewed By: Rain-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your story is great. I love the fact that you got other people to participate; It's a great idea, I should probably try it sometime. And it's a great story so far! I'm lovin' it. -Rain-chan
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Reviewed By: Raised In An asylum (lazy) On: October 27, 2004 16:28 CDT
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Good chapter , can't wait till the next one .
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Reviewed By: Raised in an asylum(Once again not logged in) On: October 21, 2004 15:44 CDT
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Awesome , this chapter was funny,can't wait till the next one
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 14:57 CDT
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*glares at yusuke* pink and flowery rooms my foot. Yay! Mines blue...awesome. my favorite color. Anyways, sounds we have a GREAT sitting room! I want it for REAL! haha. I wish. lol *snicker* I kinda agree with the comment about wearing just underwear and bra is like a bikini! but still! that was hilarious... So, the only band I know of of the three you mentioned is Jimmy Eat World because my brother has that cd...its awesome...but the other two...I have no idea. But if you like them, they can't be all bad. Yusuke sure is a hentai...all those perverted remarks and implications *shakes head* hehe. Oh yes! And we all get to sing...awesome fun! Even if we're not all rockstars, its hella fun! And the crowd surfing made me laugh SO hard. I could so imagine Hige ruffled image and soooo funny! *googly eyes* have I mentioned my supreme and undying love for Kurama? oh baby oh baby, take me I'm yours...hes so sexy. truly. Youko is just great...sooooo hentai! and he looks ultimately kawaii! and the thing about me not wearing too much makeup and just mostly natural beauty is dead on. I rarely wear it and lip gloss only is the way to go! thanks! and ooo...I wish I actually had him here to put his arm around me...I'd die of hapiness I swear it! lastly! Touya's teasing of Yune...just too cute! I loved that scene...it was adorable. Cant wait for the next chapter! I'm sure it'll be jsut as excellent! keep up the good work! ja ne!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: FeArInG rEaLiTy On: October 20, 2004 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is very good.I was to late to submit my OC (Sadly)I love this fic none the less.It's a very good plot and I liked the way you introduced the OCs .It's much better than some I have read . Every one is also In character , Hope you update soon -*^FeArInG rEaLiTy^*
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Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: October 18, 2004 21:21 CDT
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You update!!! YAY!!^_^ Now, update again!!
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Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: October 18, 2004 21:21 CDT
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You update!!! YAY!!^_^ Now, update again!!
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Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: October 18, 2004 21:21 CDT
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You update!!! YAY!!^_^ Now, update again!!
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:22 CDT
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erm *cough* sorry for multiple posts...computer hates me!
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:22 CDT
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*cough* my last review should have spelled meat..MEET. I am literate, dont ya know! wot wot! LoL ok enough silliness...I want to commend you on another excellent chapter...I really like this current situation with the girls...and guys. Thanks Koenma! LoL or thanks to you! Hey, I gotta love being tackled by Kurama dont I? But its not just me! I love how youve played out all the characters...its so promising as of yet and I look forward to more chapters of this! Your strategy for the next three chapters sounds good and I hope it works out well for you! Also, sounds good how Hiei was talking and discovering info about Shae and the girls...nice. And Yuusuke's line about Koenma having to do all the dirty work if he didnt have them was awesome. Score one. LoL. Ooo yes, and I LOOOOVE the 'benefits.' Heehee! One last note...*dreamy eyes* Youko! I can't wait! Hope you don't have too much difficulty with producing more excellent chapters! Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:20 CDT
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*cough* my last review should have spelled meat..MEET. I am literate, dont ya know! wot wot! LoL ok enough silliness...I want to commend you on another excellent chapter...I really like this current situation with the girls...and guys. Thanks Koenma! LoL or thanks to you! Hey, I gotta love being tackled by Kurama dont I? But its not just me! I love how youve played out all the characters...its so promising as of yet and I look forward to more chapters of this! Your strategy for the next three chapters sounds good and I hope it works out well for you! Also, sounds good how Hiei was talking and discovering info about Shae and the girls...nice. And Yuusuke's line about Koenma having to do all the dirty work if he didnt have them was awesome. Score one. LoL. Ooo yes, and I LOOOOVE the 'benefits.' Heehee! One last note...*dreamy eyes* Youko! I can't wait! Hope you don't have too much difficulty with producing more excellent chapters! Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:20 CDT
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*cough* my last review should have spelled meat..MEET. I am literate, dont ya know! wot wot! LoL ok enough silliness...I want to commend you on another excellent chapter...I really like this current situation with the girls...and guys. Thanks Koenma! LoL or thanks to you! Hey, I gotta love being tackled by Kurama dont I? But its not just me! I love how youve played out all the characters...its so promising as of yet and I look forward to more chapters of this! Your strategy for the next three chapters sounds good and I hope it works out well for you! Also, sounds good how Hiei was talking and discovering info about Shae and the girls...nice. And Yuusuke's line about Koenma having to do all the dirty work if he didnt have them was awesome. Score one. LoL. Ooo yes, and I LOOOOVE the 'benefits.' Heehee! One last note...*dreamy eyes* Youko! I can't wait! Hope you don't have too much difficulty with producing more excellent chapters! Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Alinna On: October 18, 2004 17:16 CDT
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AWESOME chapter ^__^ my favorite one so far , I got to give Kuwabara a concussion(Sp?)update soon plz
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Reviewed By: AttentionWallMartShoppers(Aka Raised in an asylum) On: October 14, 2004 19:58 CDT
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AWESOME! This fic rocks , it keeps getting better and better . XD you're a great aurthor , andI'm not just saying that . ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devil's Wings On: October 14, 2004 19:51 CDT
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WOW!!!!Thax you for updating!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. PLZ update soon
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