| "Fear" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: hello
Reviewed By: the mar On: January 22, 2005 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
very short chaperts,pity. Hope you'll write more.
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Reviewed By: Darcy_Superstar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2002 02:33 CST
Comment/Review:
o_O That was good. Disgustingly good. I love it. Poor Dai... Please continue. I wanna know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Fortuna On: December 03, 2001 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creepiness...you really caught the style or something...Awesome--continue soon!! |
Reviewed By: Fortuna On: December 03, 2001 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I read it on ff.net then forgot the title so I never caught up with it. Your spelling/grammar is really good- sometimes when you get people writing "here" instead of "hear" and it gets a bit irritating. But awesome job, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 On: December 01, 2001 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
that is good. i never thought i would feel sory for daisuke but u made me .u must continue it,soon |
Reviewed By: daisukefire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creepy, that's all I have to say. |
Reviewed By: Ken no Clarinet (not signed in o.O) On: August 30, 2001 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Depressing, but very well written. Keep writing! ~KNC |
Reviewed By: Angel_Q On: August 31, 2001 12:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
are you going to wrtie more i want to know what happens |
Reviewed By: eternal_ukyou On: August 31, 2001 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
NO NO NO!!! Where is the reest? I want to know..... :......( that is so sad. You are so good. And I love the matt ken thing. :) you are very talented. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: whatever On: November 21, 2001 09:30 CST
Comment/Review:
KEEP GOING!!!! I'm serious. This is a good and inda freaky fic. If you don't finish this,I will go insane wondering what happens next and do evil things (probably to you) on the internet |
