| "Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Redemption
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well just remember me when you update please.i really want to know more about this story and the next..maria
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Title: Redemption
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know that i'm a little confuss to...help..maria
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Title: Redemption
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i'm hook...i want more.but why would bulma throw him out.and i thought that bomding is with bitting...help...update soon ..maria
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