Reviewed By: DarkMastero On: November 27, 2004 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start for a fic. So far characterization for most characters are accurate except for T.K. You made him far to mean, I droughts he would have tried to hurt Davis like that on purpose. As for nitpickers, Miyako is not Yolei's last name. That was her name in the Japanese version. Her last name is Inoue (in both English and Japanese versions). Also in the summary of this fic you seem to have random question marks all over it.
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