| "Forming A Dynasty" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 17:22 CDT
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you just gained a reader and i'll add you to my list of stories on my fanfic so you can have more readers ^-^ well um i love the story can you update soon sence you havn' t updated for 3 years?!?!?!??!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 01:19 CDT
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Okay, you just lost me as a reader. I can't stand stories where pointless rape, especially rape of Kagome, occurs. Why didn't she go straight to the police? Why didn't her mother stop him? I liked your story at first and have been reading it, but because of this chapter, I won't read it anymore.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 18:35 CDT
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Well, you have my attention. I'm following your story and it is okay so far. You might want to get someone to check your spelling and there seems to be missing words in sentences here and there. Other than that, you are doing okay. I look forward to your updates. Thanks!
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