| "Enemy Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 12:40 CDT
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I've only seen this pairing 2 maybe 3 times. btw not written in a way to in the least interesting. this is written well enough to be believable. hope to see more updates!!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks! Please update soon! I really want to know wht happends next
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Reviewed By: Kenkaya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! It's always nice to find someone other than myself who supports and writes this great pairing! I really like the inner-tribal strife and tension you've created with Jurai and Madoka. Your OC's are very well characterized and believable. I particularly like the role you've given Yoshiro: using his growing affection for Kouga and Kagura to illustrate how the villages' preconceptions of youkai are changing. The only real problem I had with the fic was that I felt the physical relationship between the main pairing was a bit rushed. As Inu/Kag have shown us, unconfessed romantic tension can make for some fun and dramatic situations. Also, Kagura is new to most of the emotions she is feeling for Kouga and I personally felt some more deliberation over this issue before would have been nice. But you seem to be handling Kagura's psychological demons well now, especially with the jealousy over Kagome and the trauma she demonstrates over Naraku's baby. I also like how Kouga is started to think about her "inexperience" with life now and would like to see how that affects his handling of their relationship in future chapters. He certainly seems like he's learned caution but they both still have a lot to work through. You seem to have most of the bases covered in some way shape or form though, so feel free to ignore my nitpicking. I really enjoyed this fic (and not just for the pairing, though that was definitely a plus) I look forward to reading more! Happy writing!
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Title: Terrific Fic
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story. It was quite a long time between updates, but definitely worth the wait. There isn't a thing that comes to my mind to criticize, or even constructively criticize for that matter. xD All I can ask for is that you get more to me soon. I can't wait to see you keep up the excellent work on your wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 09:32 CDT
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Addendum, apparently the HTML code for italics works without HTML coded pages, so the bold one should too. The code is < i> < /i> for italics (again, remove the spaces), < b> < /b> for bold, and < u> < /u> for underline. Additional lines should (might) be < / br> but that's the 'proper' coding, the code it'll probably accept is < br> (again, remove the space after the < ) I'm not positive all the HTML coding will work, but the formatting code at least should.
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now normally I'm a little aghast at pairings that aren't at least HINTED at being cannon, but I read through TOTD and I just couldn't resist reading this too. (and the numerous DA pictures by other authors I love didn't hurt) And I must admit, this is certainly the only time I've seen this pairing in any fanfictions... I think I know of a way to at least fix one of your problems with formatting. MM.org has a nasty habit of clipping the spacing of it's stories to be a certain way, no matter how you upload it, but you can fool it into working FOR you... whenever you have a scene change or something just but XXX or 0-0-0-0-0 or some sort of line break between the scenes and MM.org will take that as a paragraph break, thus providing you with a 3 line separation! I don't know if MM uses HTML or BBCode encoding, but with HTML italics are < /i> and BBCode it's [i] [ /i] (just remove the spaces) (also, HTML code might only work if you save it as an HTML document... Icky stuff writing a whole piece of work in all HTML) I hope you don't completely ignore one fic for the other, but I must admit I do prefer the cannon pairings in TOTD... And the interesting developing plot there!
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Title: Your fic
Reviewed By: kirayasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 19:13 CDT
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*sighs* I really love not only this fic, but this pairing! & I'm happy I now ahve 3 chappies to do fanart for! YAY!! :D
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked it quite a lot. They seem to make the perfect pair. Well done :)
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Title: dragoninu
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 14:14 CST
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Hello! I'm a lurker from one of your clubs on yahoo, and I just got to reading your fanfic on Kagura and Kouga! Brilliant! I can't wait for more! I also love your Temple of Dog fic too. Can't wait to see more! ! ! *whimper* Will it be long? Love ya!
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