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| "Prophecy of Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: And the drama increases...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah! The more Jinx I see, the better I like the story! The triangle is gonna get pretty convaluted the way you're going, but that just makes for more drama! Also, I found a good Raven/Jinx fic on fanfiction.net called "Pitch and Pink" I can't remember the author though, oh well. It's really good, not complete yet, but most fics aren't. Hope you enjoy, and hope you update A Titan's Hero (Raven'Jinx) soon! Also, I like Dreams of Red, good job!
| Reviewed By: mouserr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 22:06 CST
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i think i like this depiction of the end of the club scene more than the other tho i can see the other happening specially with the chem influence on alien biology. glad you removed that particular burden from her >^-^< cant wait to see whats next, might be interesting to see if the titans would extend an invite to Ice and/or Jynx. Jynx mostly since as a former baddie and the whole 'second chance' theme the titans abide by ... eh either way great story thus far and lookin forward to the next several chapters.
| Title: I NEED MORE! AND YAY ON RAVEN/JINX!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 19:14 CST
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Oh thank you! I give you...THE SUPER DUPER CHIBI CONGO LINE!!! (Chibi Saint Raven, Raven, Jinx, Starfire, and Terra all line up and start dancing)
| Title: Oh yeah...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:09 CST
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...I just added you to my list of favorite authors! Yay!
| Title: Yay! I got mentioned...but you're still a meanie!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just kidding. I'm not mad about no Raven/Jinx. Actually, I was wondering; do you know of any Raven/Jinx fanfics? I'm still looking for them and I haven't found any. Anyway, liked the last chapter, hope for another update soon! Byie!!!
| Reviewed By: mouserr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im really enjoying this revamp of the story, few minor typos and errors easily overlooked in favor of well told story. biggest plus in my book is legit realistic portrayal of X use *never touched the stuff myself but have friends who do* along with the reference material link. wish more people who use drug refs would follow suit. i actualy find it refreshing to see the subject handled so well. do have 1 question re the original version ... you still got it intact somewhere? im an avid reader and would love to be able to compare 1st draft against redraft >^-^~.^< hope she is round more in the story *grin* you can probly guess what im thinkin so i wont bore you with the details. keep up the good work. oh and just so ya know i dont post often just when a story catches my full attention as this 1 has. when its complete itll be added to my hardcopy fic library, few fanfics catch my attention enough to merit printing. this will be #14. p.s. if you need another proofreader send me a msg id be glad to help. >^-^
| Title: Oh! I wanted a Raven/Jynx...but Cyborg's okay too...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 20:19 CST
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Oh well, at least it's not Robin, I hate Robin! Keep up the good work, and update soon!
| Title: Um...nevermind...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 15:10 CST
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For some reason, I'm logged in now...I don't get it. Still love the story and everything, bye!
| Title: YAY! IT'S A JYNX!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story kicks major ass. Sorry this review isn't signed, for some reason Mediaminer keeps logging me out...oh well. I really like the story and cannot wait for the next chapter.
| Title: review part 2
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:33 CST
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This is the second qualm that I have, being that you tend to be overly detailed with your explanations. Focus more on the idea, and let us draw our own conclusions. That way you will not end up frustrating readers by making us read more than is necessary when you are only trying to convey a simple scenario. Well, that's that for me. I hope that you don't feel that I've been talking out my ass this entire time. Nor did I wish in any way for this review to sound preachy, its just that I like to help in any way that I can when I see things that can be worked on in a story or writing style. You have talent, don't doubt that, but don't think your writing is perfect either. All of us have room for improvement, and reviews are just one way for us writers to better ourselves. Now I shall go on to read the next chapters…but I don't know if I'll do another review this long anytime soon…^_^ - Chaos Damn It (p.s. - this is the second part of the review)
| Title: review part 1
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:13 CST
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Well, I've started to read it all over again...and I am sorry to say that from what I have gathered in the prologue, there seems to be nothing that is all that different from the original. Don't get me wrong, it's still a really good story, but I just couldn't tell exactly what you changed. Yet reading your work over again has allowed me see a few things that I had missed before. Unfortunately, they are bad things. First off is your repetition of words and actions. I know that it can be difficult to think up different ways to say the same thing over and over again, but the results are much better than just continuing with what works the first time. An example would be Ravens constant brushing off of thoughts. True, this is undoubtedly something that she would do, and often at that, but saying that she's done it multiple times, without changing any of the descriptive elements associated with it and presenting it in the same way over and over again gets obnoxious. Sometimes we the readers need to be allowed to let our imaginations work around the situation that you give us and develop our own details in our mind's eye. This works as getting across a point with maximum impact while including minimal weighty detail that you write out for us. CONTINUED IN NEXT REVIEW (p.s. - this is the first part of the review.)
| Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 13:36 CST
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well, my questions aren't really any closer to being answered...if anyting i'm actually even more confused. -_- but oh well, that just means that i have to wait for the next chapter. anyways, this was another excellent installment. keep up the good work. - Chaos Damn It
| Reviewed By: mouserr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 00:48 CST
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i agree with chaos damn it this is a great story, ftheres a few rough edges but easily ignored for the whole of it. >^-^
| Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:29 CST
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Done, finished, and through with the final chapter that you have out, and I must say...grr-snaffle-growl-ugh-ook-ook-shimmy-shimmy-bang-bang. Times two. Man, this story is so awesome that it is beyond words. Hence my previous super word. ^_^ I really can't wait till you put out another chapter. Seriously. Hurry up man. I'm dyin here. Oh yeah, one more thing; is this going to be a Raven, Starfire, Terra romance, or is Starfire just going to be a real close friend? Because I must say that it's awful hard to tell. I'm kinda hoping for the Raven, Starfire, Terra mix. Starfire doesn't need to be lonely! - Chaos Damn It
| Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Now this is what I call a buried treasure. It comes as a complete and utter shock that not a soul has bothered to review this story. It really just baffles me, because you my friend have talent, and plenty of it at that...something that is kinda rare, as I have come to find. Well, you keep doin whatever it is that you are doin, because it's obviously working. As for me, it's off to the second chapter! - Chaos Damn It
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