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Title: Perfection!!!
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!! I really enjoyed that plot twist with the prisoners!!! This story is one of my favorite fanfics that I have read!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!
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Title: Future of the Past
Reviewed By: Kagero13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WhooHoo! This plot keeps twisting and twisting! I love it! Your fan, Kagero13
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter and great read. I'd love to say more but I have work to do and review other stories. Anyway I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: priscel-- On: November 29, 2004 17:57 CST
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*Glomps CeeDee* WAAA!!! thank you for another interesting chapter! man i dunno what to say, that dream Duo had was mad freaky, but it was interesting that he blew up the Xertoin (sp? sorryz if i spelled it wrong) but hey who says that you can't do that in dreams. So why did he find himself next to and 'old' Xer-alienwhatzit and not one attacking him directly? or one leaving one of still bodies of his friends and coming toward him, hmm... is it hinting at the possibility of Duo being captured? btw Duo makes a great captain *feels like a broken record*!! When Heero said that Duo was screaming in his sleep, how come the others didn't come, they live in close quarters of each other and how come bethor Didn't try to help heero wake Duo, by pinging the com thingy near his ear? More please!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far. I wish you won't have so many spaces between the paragrahps though. This story is really creative and original, it's the only story i've read liek this. And i love reading it, it's highly entertaining. Keep up the great work!!! Update Soon Please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kogero13 On: November 29, 2004 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WhooHoo! Multiple plot twists, romance, sex, major ass kicking; you write one hell of a fic and we are loving it! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 00:28 CST
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wow, soon we get to see the g-boys kick some Alien bootaah! Hmmm I was so hoping that Duo would have a chance to discuss with Quat what the strange feeling he had been having was. i think prehaps he's a bit of a seer/clairvoyant/highly preceptive. I think Duo makes a wonderful captain and his ability in leadership and taking up the role that he was obligated to since birth and his parents' death shows how strong he really is. *snickers* not only is he seemingly clairvoyant or highly preceptive but something else? he was made heero cream himself with just the thought he transmitted with the words of how much he loved and trust him to offer himself to him in that way (which they seemed to avoid by not avoiding it). i thought that the recording of trieze sharing that intimate moment with Une was beautiful *has a vivid imagination* *bounces* I can't wait for the next update, so do it soon!!!
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Reviewed By: pRiscEl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 02:42 CST
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Ch.4!! whaa!! I thought that prehaps the guys were joking, maybe they are joking but were so stunned by Duo's reaction that they were shocked into silence and unable to tell him that they were just joking. If they were not joking I don't think that I would want them to help me save the world because they realized, quiltily, that indeed greed had taken them over. onward!
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Reviewed By: priscel-- On: November 26, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Please step back. You will be paralyzed if you touch my body." LOL oh i like this baby already and i only read the first chapter!
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Reviewed By: Muffie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 05:15 CST
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I've been avoiding this, a bit. The title didn't grab me. Since it got long, though, I decided to check it out and I'm glad I did. Excellent writing! Very nice. I like Duo and I really, really love your Heero. He makes me wanna cuddle him. I do wonder when Heero will figure out that Treize died in AC 196 and, therefore, could not have survived to AC 257 to commission the ship, send it back in time, and leave a recording for Une to see so, logically, Duo won't cease to exist because 1) he hasn't already even though the future the ship comes from has been altered and 2) Treize's 257 AC recording is still around to be enjoyed even though TK died in 196 AC. I liked the turtle soup touch, by the way. It's just that kind of thing I'd expect a lady to remember on the day her love proposed.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chappie and a story that just gets better and better. I like the way you write Duo and Heero and the others and I just can't get enough of this story. The lemon was icing on the cake and it was nice to see the two boys have some down time to relax before the shit hits the fan. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Kagero13 On: November 14, 2004 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great fic! Multiple plot twists, angst, ass kicking and yummy sex! I'm in heaven. Your creativity is very much appreciated, thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words just fail me. This just gets better and better and the emotions spill out at the right time. I really really love this story (I have been sick why I haven't reviewed a couple of times) and look forward to it. Your story and a few others I watch out for with obsession, heh. Keep up the great work, you never disappoint me.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 30, 2004 18:39 CDT
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and the culprit is....? update again soon!
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Reviewed By: *** On: October 24, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon, please. Good story, by the way
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