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Reviewed By: Demonic_kat2001 On: October 21, 2004 12:28 CDT
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You're really good at writting these stories. I encorage you to keep writing, and I hope that there will be less tension between the guys. Also, I find it wierd that they are all so cold towards Duo. I mean, it's not like he knows waht's going on, but they make it seem like he knows more than what he does already know. I think that Heero is the only one that understnads Duo, and even if the others are only starting to understand, it is good that atleast one person, other than howard and his mechanics, belives in him. Keep it up. I really like this story and it would be a shame if you didn't continue it. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Mara_chan On: October 18, 2004 17:26 CDT
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really well written... and that is something that is a deciding factor for me reading fanfics... i'm really impressed with the plot too. and that you aren't trying to rush into any relationships. you shouldn't cave to any readers who want to see 'action' between any of the characters. write it how you want to, that's how the best stories are written anyway. good luck to you, and i'll be checking up to read more. again, this is a very good fanfic. ~Mara~
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, love your description and the way you get Duo to convey it. The Heero and Duo moment was just enough to give a taste but not too much to make it to soon. The other pilots are great making this story one of my favourites. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. This story only gets better with every chapter and I can't stop reading it until the end. Gripping story that makes me watch out for this story every time. I look forward to the next chapter. Excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: starshifter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I avoided this fic as long as I could. The summary didn't grab me yanno? but, I am pleasantly surprised. I was really pleased to see it was duo-centric, but I was wincing when I read the sci-fi plot. Not that I really think it is bad - I could just name a cannon movie at every turn. I also had a hard time on the stasis bit. Usually, you crawl into stasis to survive...not when you are dying. Overall, I think you have a great story, a delightful read. Too few of those these days (especially with blended sci-fi) in between all of PWP's and neko's. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 13, 2004 04:41 CDT
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that was one way to end the chapter.....hopefully it was just a joke or a test, but oh well. update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaylan On: October 11, 2004 03:05 CDT
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I like the way you write! Nice ideas you have there! Hope you'll be able to finish this and soon. I'm dying to read what's next. ;) Though I am curious. How did Heero get infected with that?
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. The opening was perfect, Duo's parents and even himself. Great beginning to the chapter. This story is opening out perfectly with just enough information to keep the reader interested. I found I was sitting on the edge of my seat and loving every word I was reading. Duo in this story is a take charge first then let his emotions take over. Keep up the good work and I look forward to another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: October 09, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and the quick update. Nothing like a good science fiction with aliens and a deadline to pull things together. They're certainly few and far in between.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 09, 2004 22:48 CDT
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wow...that was fast. so duo's dad is still alive huh? i wonder how crazy quatre will sound to the others when they find out about duo's demand. well, update again soon! it's going great!
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Reviewed By: New Dye On: October 09, 2004 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this story! I am going to put this story under Favorites. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. It has it all. Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, SciFi, Alien Evasion, and more! This story is so good that I got very disappointed that you had ended it so soon! Update please!
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. This story is so intriguing that I was biting my lip through it. The research is excellent giving the story an outline of things to come. The bit with the rest of the gang just sets it out nicely, and poor Heero. I'm only glad that Duo kept a level head and you haven't made him into a emotional gibbering idiot. I love this and I'm now truly hooked. Keep up the excellent work. Shae-chan
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 08, 2004 14:11 CDT
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well now that's a lot more interesting. i can't wait to see what happens next. will duo be going back anytime soon to meet the other gw pilots? hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the setup. It's very cool to have Duo inventing great things. The angst over his relationship with the other Gundam pilots is pretty realistic. Howard is very cool, and the plot is gripping!
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: October 07, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this earlier today on the GW Bulletin Board and had wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying your story. Here's my chance. This is an excellent story all the way around. I'd always hoped scientists could come up with a replicator like the one they had in Star Trek, it was so cool. At least you could use the idea as one of Duo's inventions and the reason for not mass producing it was sound. I love to be kept in suspense as to what's going to happen and you do that well, so keep up the good work. I just hope you plan on updating regularly.
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