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"The Prototype" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Ssaffr01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 21, 2005 12:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I just read your review, Carl. But, I take it you've never seen one of THOSE movies before. Your basic porn star, has curves like a mountan road, top heavy and dressed in the most skimpiest outfits. So that's why I described her like that.
 Reviewed By: jj0 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2005 09:24 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
meh.
 Reviewed By: Campin Carl [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
You have possibly the crudest form of writing I have ever seen. "She had a body like a porn star?" WHAT THE HELL KIND OF A DESCRIPTION IS THAT! Your grammar is horrible, as well as your wording. I had a hard time understanding it. What's your first language, anyway? It's not english.

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