| "Sesshoumaru's Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: 'Seshos' Flame
Reviewed By: Gabsy On: March 04, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wusup my name is Gabby and i just wanna say that your writing is a ver good one and please,hurry up wiht the next chapter , i mean really, i have it on my faverites because im afraid i wont be able to see/ find it!Please hurry up!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey your story is really good no i do not think it is sucky i think it very good. I hope you write more soon. LOL INUYASHA'S REACTION WHEN HE HERES ABOUT KAG AND SESSHOUMARU IS GOING TO BE PRICELESS!!!!! update soon please.
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: March 02, 2005 03:13 CST
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WOW chica u totaly get goofy when your up late. Just how much caffinee did u go though on this chapter? LOL when I write that late at night my poor chareaters wind up with major toment but u? nope you make them happy gooffy and silly. Great chapgter by the way. PUPPY YEA!! "Orion
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: March 01, 2005 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope Shippo finds Kagome first! ^_^ that would be so funny and a big dent on Kouga and InuYashas HUGH Egos! lmao well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: Sesshoumaru's Flame
Reviewed By: FongSaiYuk319 On: March 01, 2005 08:45 CST
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Yo, this has got to be the best fanfic i've EVER read...man, you are a really good writer. I usually don't review stuff....but i was just blown away at how good this was. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:35 CST
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i think that decision should be entirely up to you. You would not loose me as a reader if you had a lemon chapter, but i think you should decide! By the way, your revamp at the end of chap 7 turned out really nice! Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:04 CST
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Just when did mm.org start the timed log in. I read one chapter and then review, and then another chapter of some thing and go to review, And the have to log in again. Sorry I was ranting, anyways great chapter. I like the revised part and really laught to the point of tear about Inu and Kouga. If you haven't seen Apple Dumpling Gand lately, you should. There are great slap stick laughter in it. I would like to read a lemon, and if it's your first that bring it on. Updat soon, later.
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Title: YOU'RE TOO FUNNY
Reviewed By: kikyouhater118 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 18:26 CST
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I COULD NEVER THINK ABOUT TIME WHEN HIS HOT LIPS ARE COMING AT ME EITHER.PLEASE KEEP GOING DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 13:08 CST
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great fan fic! I really enjoyed the mental struggle of our main hotty. keep updating! oh, p.s., i really dont think the end of your last chapter sucked at all. it had a nice flow. (just so you know)
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 13:21 CST
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lmao that was really funny keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 04:18 CST
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Well that was a longer chappter I loved the training session. Good intro to her talent. If u don't want to use the word Magic I can suggest talent/gift/power. :P I like gift personaly but hey I'm a Lackey fan sooooo...:D And now to switch into cretique mode(helpful/positive type) I think your moving the relationship between Sesshy and Kagome a bit fast. It seems a little forced and fake. Sesshy hates humans and the only reason he took Kagome is the phycial raction. I love that twist by the way its soo cool and lends its self so well to conflict and comic romance (gets all giggly with anticipation) The thing is I think that Sesshy has accepted it a bit too soon. I would suggest you have him back off and fight it a bit more. I loved that in the previous chapters. Make him resist and grumble and slowly fall for her with out reilizing it :D Don't pay too much heed to me though tis ultimetly your story and you should write what you want. ;) just thought I'd stick my nose in and offer advise to a great author. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 19:52 CST
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Thank you. I loved the whole morning scene. It made the last part actually work out. He kissed her. Yay! Where is Sango? I forgot where you had her at. Oh, and the whole thing with Inu, Kouga and Miroku along with Shippo was neat. Update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 14, 2005 17:23 CST
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Rin's adorable!!!!!!! Keep her in the story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 14, 2005 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up, keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry and mak the next chapter soon!!! I can't wait! What happens to Sesshy-baby? Does his pretty face get clobbered?!?!?! Does Miroku have any more of a part? Does Inu-baby know where Sesshy-baby lives?!?!( Hey, cuteness runs in the family. What can I say?) WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 06:17 CST
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o_O inu and kouga? too shocked by the mental image to talk.....it wouldn't be bad i guess. but I'm not fond of youi in Inuyasha. Orion
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