| "Sesshoumaru's Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miyu#2kogal On: May 18, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
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The last (or second to last since it's so long) chapter was great writing, but I'm afraid I now officially hate Inuyasha (and I have a special Inu doll on my bed, how can I burn such cuteness?) I don't know if I can ever watch Inuyasha again, but it was worth it. Great story, great writing, everything is perfect! This is now my absolute favorite fanfic ever.
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Title: the awesome power of power bars!!! (sry 4 copying)
Reviewed By: Miyu+#2 On: May 17, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooved chapter 9! (spilers) the sesshy's power bar comments and shippo's wind shield combined made me laugh and laugh and laugh. At first I was sceptical but this plot is VERY original and i love it! Great job-and please keep writing!!!
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Title: THANKS!
Reviewed By: Sesshy Fan! On: May 04, 2006 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just started reading this fic. and I love it! I've been printing them out at skool cause we have no internet and I have ur fic. papers littering mi floor! Srry, may sound obsessed but truth be told, I AM! Keep 'em coming and thatnks for makin' a great fic!
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Title: A question
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF IS THE SEQUAL CALLED?! (LOVED IT!)
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 00:13 CST
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Nice to see the of this. I liked the idea from the start. But somethings were left behind or not expanded. I did enjoy the comedy, but there was more at the end then at the beginning of the story. I would say that at the beginning, this story would be labeled as romance with some comedy. Towards the end that change to comedy with a little romance. Your writing style changed as well, it became rushed kind of. Remember don't sacrifice quality for quantity. Now matter how long the chapter is, if the quality that was in the short chapter is not there the style is not consistance. I saw lots of potential for the story to go for a long while. Fighting bad guys, overcoming obstacle. But in the long run it was a joy to read. Just could have been better. I thank you for your wonderfull words on my own. And someday with inspiration comes back I will have more to add. Thanks again for a fun read. Later.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 16:44 CST
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It was an enthralling story, to which I have enjoyed to quite an extent. I would like to thank you for such a wonderous tale. I cannot wait for the sequal. Congratulations~ Silver_wolf
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life NSI On: November 28, 2005 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All Tens! *Applauds* Outstanding work. I can't believe it is finally over. you can totally count on me reading the sequels! After all, you are on my favourites list. You asked if I have any fics. Back when I first started reading this I didn't. But now I have three; all Inuyasha. Two one-shots and a multi-chapter story that I have got a lot of nice comments on. I think you'll really enjoy it. It is called Forever Yours. Let me know if you like it! Nah, the only other sites I know are the ones you mentioned. I'm going to post some things on ff.net...someday...maybe...lol. Thanks for an excellent ending and I look forward to the sequel. Oooh...look at the long review....! Lol. Happy Writing! *Happy Face*
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Reviewed By: curly211 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 12:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why won't you Update! I have you in my favorites and everything! Please
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: June 03, 2005 05:18 CDT
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Yayyyyyy!!!!!! U ROCK!!! Hurry and write the next chappy! This is so much fun! I especially like InuYasha and Koga... It's so much fun reading about them trying to insult each other, and failing miserably, but still getting mad. Didja ge all that? I'm a little confused at what I said and I wrote it! ^______________^;
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Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: May 09, 2005 17:00 CDT
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a club sounds fun... but what would we name it? and the jackets can't have pink (it's the one color i hate besides puke green) anyways, great chappie, great job, and update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 21:30 CDT
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Nothing like your loved one being out of reach (sort of0 to make you confess. Great chapter. I can't wait more. Oh and Inuyasha doesn't seem to be even worried about Kagome after all. At least she had Sesshoumaru. Later.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Title: eat da chease!
Reviewed By: Mirokus Wench [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ha! i told you i'd review this time! any this chapter was a little...okay it rocked! more kouga and inuyasha! i expect to see at least the first part of the next chapter by this saturday...or your plushie will suffer!! out with many smiles, miroku's wench^_^
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life(not logged in) On: May 05, 2005 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOh!!!!! A LONG chapter!!!!!! i love long chapters they make the wait easier. I am so so so happy you are not abandoning the story i would be so sad if you did. Just a chapter and an epilogue left yay! i will know the ending soon. This is such an awesome story i think you should post it on other fanfiction sites too. You are such a great writer. Update soon please (see i have good manners lol)
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 12:47 CDT
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lol, wonderful imagery with Kagome defending her pups/kits/kids/whatever you want to call them ^_^ All I could think of was a miniature sun with sun burst coming out of the sphere to kill hapless youkai. just great. As for sesshou....Someone really needs to hit that guy over the head. that he could forget basic hygiene....so strange. Anywyas, I hope the next chapter and epilogue aren't as difficult as this one turned out to be to write!
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